I do wish that you would continue this tale. I hope that you do. I've always liked the Nabiki and Ranma engaged at the beginning stories. She seems a much better match for him in my mind.

Wow. That was cool! :D

great story

need to expand on why the ought came to nabiki.

Well, I agree with the others in that it should be continued. I liked Cloud-Dreamer's story.

As a one-shot it lacks a lot of the dialgue and substance that is necessary for a substantial one-shot.
So I consider it a prologue so I do hope you can continue this.

dennisud

Nice start. Looking forward to you making this one a series, if possible.

Do me a favor and flesh this story out more. It is a very good oneshot but it needs more detail. Making such huge jumps in one paragraph isn't good for the flow of the story. All in all it is a good lil' oneshot.

Weird for a one-shot as it seems more like a prologue.

As for directions, maybe add a OMG crossover, with Skuld trying to prove she is better at matchups than Urd, using her goddess abilities to divine which girl would be a better match with hurting the elast amount of people, as well as loosening their tongues during the talk. It would explain why Nabiki had such a strong thought and forgot.

That being said, not bad.

not bad.

please say there will be akane bashing in this. or at the very least very badluck to the bad tempered, peeping, manic depressive, bipolar, lesbian of a tomboy

I... expected a bit more... like some internal monolouge? some deep character insight... Anything? So what excatly prompt Nabiki to take Ranma as her fiancee? What was this Intense idea that made Nabiki speechless?

Meh... I'd say more... but i didn't read past that part...

excellent

Could you PLEASE continue this?
I happen to be a MAJOR FAN of Ranma/Nabiki and with all the depressing stuff coming down around me ...let's just say that any relief is a BIG help.

Derek The Rogue