How is each part of this story so amazing in such few words? This was absolutely wonderful!

Aw, very nice

The scene sectioning was great. A way to get the story to it's point, and such.

Good ending (:

Beautiful. An absolutely beautiful masterpiece. It was so touching, and everything fits together so perfectly!

I wish there was a way for authors to feel the emotions they inspire in their readers so that I could properly share the wonderful, heart-wrenching joy this fic has made me feel. I don't have words to describe how much I love you right now, so I guess I'll have to leave it at that. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.

That was very cute. :3

Aww, this was awesome. :) I like it very much. I'm glad you didn't let Fai die and the ending bit it nice. Awesomely written.

That was really cute! Good job

That was sweet. Absolutely, sort of bittersweet(if you get it here's your cookie). Loved it.

This was so incredibly sweet and so well put together. Just...

...Beautiful.

This was a beautiful piece. Loved how you strung together snap-shots to form a coherent picture of the four. Good job.

Alana: aw that was so toching!

Evo: Alan I think you spellet that wroung!

Alana: *pouts and Pulls at face at Evo*

Evo: *sighs*

awesome! and i loved how sakura always said "it's magic"

I loved how you used italics at the end, making it seem like faint, faraway words that are like the smoke to the fire (which is the story, of course), which is then blown away as soon as it's said.

Cute Very, very cute. I like the fact that they TALK about magic, I think it was so pretty when Fai used it for the first time in the manga, I was soo sad when he said he'd never do it again T_T The part when Syaoran and Sakura watch Kurowan and Fai in the snow and she says "magic", it's just... adorable. _

I like the stories, too. Fai is like a dad for the kids

(... does that make Kuropuu their mom ? *laugh*)

Lovely, really.

ahh! so nice! and i loved the ending. no oticable gramme/spelling mistakes, and nothing was confusing. everyone was in character. very well written. i liked how the minne-chapters didn't tell the whole story, just what you needed to the plot, too!