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0553140 2008-11-18 . chapter 13
Chapter 12

Oh.. god! The part where where Gai made his DYNAMIC ENTRY had me sniggering for quite a while!
Poor Kakashi!
InARealPickle 2008-11-07 . chapter 34
Kakashi seems to care about Naruto. At the beginning of the story he was thinking about buying Naruto a stuffed animal. So why now is he freaking out about Jinchuuriki? Bijuu I can understand... but the hate he was spewing about Jinchuuriki seems unfounded considering he cares about one.
InARealPickle 2008-11-07 . chapter 20
NO0O0O0O

Kakashi! what Happened to your Cool and Hip Modern attitude?!?!

lmao
dual dynamic entry heehee
InARealPickle 2008-11-07 . chapter 13
Oh Gai lol
and his ridiculously funny catch phrases and demented spells
lolol

Need comic relief? write Gai into a chapter!
Rebelgirl666 2008-10-22 . chapter 20
Sorry, I've gotta say this. Great chapter, but Yorkshire pudding is not a a dessert. It's a dish that goes with a roast dinner. You serve it with gravy or white sauce deoending on what meat.

I'm English, sorry. Had to point that out. But I LOVED the Dual Dynamic Entry. And the banana's stuck to Snape's robes, wicked.

Cushty!
blindhobos 2008-10-16 . chapter 13
LOL!! Gai always makes me laugh!! I love how Kakashi mentions Itachi and Itachi sneezes. Funny!
Chuni Luni 2008-09-20 . chapter 35
Freakin awesome story!

I at first wasn't gonna read this but then I thought 'what the heck I'll give it a try' and I'm so glad I did!

Keep up the great work!
Tomo Irizuki 2008-09-11 . chapter 35
i loved this story it has a bit of everything.
Tomo Irizuki 2008-09-11 . chapter 21
omg, snape was so happy.
Tomo Irizuki 2008-09-11 . chapter 20
lol, this is so funny. bunnies and food!
Tomo Irizuki 2008-09-11 . chapter 19
awesome story.
Tomo Irizuki 2008-09-11 . chapter 18
wow this is very awesome. i love this fic.
blueyblonde 2008-08-27 . chapter 35
i love it
Little Kunai 2008-08-03 . chapter 31
smart moves
Little Kunai 2008-08-03 . chapter 27
interesting. i like how you made kakashi act as though he were taking them out with senbon or pressure points. that right there was a flawless blend. good job.
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