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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Sara and Greg were talking. |
| Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseVery good story. |
| Misile 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseTHat rocks. You rock. I Want to print this story off and glue it to my wall. YAY for you. |
| Salt'N'Peppers 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseAh! I loved it! |
| Heavenly Moments 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. It was just..simple yet detailed. I enjoyed reading this so much. =) |
| silhouette 2006-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. It was so brilliantly written. The storyline's different from what I usually read... There's a sense of mystery, the characterization, how you show another side of Greg. Sort of, layered... Like I didn't know what's really beneath the surface. Well done :) |
| Smash 2006-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou have a gift... |
| Nyx Raisa 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was amazingly well-written. Stories written like this are few and very far between on this site. Sure, there are good stories, and stories with good intentions, but it's a rare thing to find one like this. I'm adding to my favorites. Hey, if you still need a beta, I'm willing to take the job. :-) |
| Sundown 2005-12-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought this was a very well written story, and worth reading again :-) You handled the subject matter with a touch of seriousness and humor. Good blending and good characterization. I just wish this is what would happen on the show. I think Greg is the best balance for Sara. I hope you write more! |
| Lalenna 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI dont if it was because my bros were nagging me or if it was the story but for some reason this just didnt hit me. The characterisation was good, as was the storyline, but it just didnt manage to hit my unconsious interal buzzer that makes me think 'Wow, I have to read this again.' Sorry, this must seem like a lousy review - ignore me if you feel that my review is totally off. -Lenna |
| IDoNotJudge 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseAWESOME! Serious Greg scares me. a little. a lot actually lol Great Story! I absolutely loved it! |
| Kegel 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautifully written. Great story. |
| daily 2005-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story, make more! |
| remoob1513 2005-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abusewow thats really good. i love his sort of cryptivness and how it frightened her. i love these angsty sweet ones there cute. cant wait to read more. please please please PLEASE WRITE MORE? PLEASE? |
| CinnamonFaerie 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. |