This was really good, but I felt that Jackson was a bit out of character for a child. You have to figure that he would have been a smart kid, but this was a little quirky. Other than that I love this story!

This was beautiful - you truly possess the gift of writing. Your style remind me a little of Stephen King when he's not doing his scary stuff.

I always hesitate to read childhood stories in fandom, I never tend to like them - but this was clearly the exception to the rule.

Great work! //Nic.

Loved it! It was sweet...never thought I'd say that while talking about something concerning Jackson, but it's true. And Jackson is an alias? Didn't know that. I agree, he's Jackson to me too.

I wasn't sure if I'd like the story, because I thought it was a stretch that the two would meet as kids, but I fell in love with this fic. Your detail is just magnificent... he. I wore Keds, too. Am I showing my age? The bad fashion, LOL. And the name conversation made me grin. I'm not sure why, but weirdly it's really cute in the movie. "Do you go by Jack for short?" "No... never." And this time he didn't explain what his last name was, just simply, "No... never." And the cute of the two of them meeting on the playground. :)

About the credit, if y'all would like to see the interviews, they're on the Red Eye official site. They're worth seeing, if for no other reason than the fact that with Cillian's Irish accent the name "Reisert" comes out really hot. ;)

Anyhoo, congrats on a job well done, I loved this fic. Quite a lot, actually.

i love this story! and the song too, or maybe just coldplay as a whole...your story is way cute!

hey great one shot, but i was wondering if you could email me the name of that band, i love the lyrics! anyways I hope you write more.

Good story! I enjoyed reading it! :)

A very cute story and interesting possibility. The interaction between Jackson and Lisa was very well-written. Keep up the good work.