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| freakygirlhere 2008-04-30 ch 11, | abuseI have been reading this story for 3 days now, and have finally finished. It was well worth the time. It seemed like a feature-length version of the real thing and is definetly one of the best fan fics I've read for any catergory. You had adventure, a well thought out plot with no obvious holes, character study and it was believable throughout. Well done not only for the story, but for sticking with it for so long, and thank you. |
| bookwrangler 2006-11-05 ch 11, | abuseWell done ending. All of the right touches. I really liked Karolyne's assessment of Syd and Nigel's relationship. This was a tale well worth the wait. Thank you so much. |
| Sunflower18 2006-11-01 ch 11, | abuseWell done, I enjoyed it. |
| Half-elf 2006-10-29 ch 11, | abuseThat was very good although I admit that I was expecting a little more at the end. I'd like to see what happens after their return, if they arrived at the same time they left, how they dealt with the knowledge of other demensions and magic... that sort of thing. The sotry was very good though, I enjoyed it very much. |
| RosesBud 2006-10-23 ch 11, | abuseYay, all done at last (I used to be KatmuEllon by the way!) This story was wonderfully different and amazingly descriptive, I could really imagine Telurra. Well done! |
| Aryea 2006-10-23 ch 11, | abuseFantastic job! very, very,very, (did I mention very?) Good Job. Absolutely brilliant. Thank God! I couldnt take the suspense much longer. :) |
| loopylulu 2006-10-23 ch 11, | abuseI enjoyed this very much and it had a great ending. I hope you will write more stories. |
| tistrust 2006-10-23 ch 11, | abuseGreat story! I really liked the part when Nigel and Sydney were in that house, so sweet. Anyways, you did a wonderful job. |
| Craic agus Ceol 2006-10-22 ch 11, | abuseIt's bittersweet, I'll tell you that...I love the story, and am sad to see it's over, but I like the ending and that the bad guys are gone now! Yay! Now then, perhaps we can have a sequel someday? I'm not asking for one right away, but maybe someday if inspiration strikes you...:) Great job, again! |
| katia1 2006-10-22 ch 11, | abuseThat was a great ending. I particularly liked the ending fight, Syd 'kicking **' and Nigel getting the relic...can't wait for more stories. I'm just sad its ended! katy x |
| loopylulu 2006-10-10 ch 10, | abuseI read this the other day and had to get a proper login to review. I love this story. I'm looking forward to reading the end. lulu. |
| Aryea 2006-10-08 ch 10, | abuseEXCELLENT! Very well done. Enjoyed the bridge scene, very tense, glad they made it through. Poor nigel, first he almost knocks Sydney off a cliff and then that horrible bridge. What ARE you doing to our favorite Englishman. (Like I should talk ha!) Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Craic agus Ceol 2006-10-07 ch 10, | abuseicky icky invisible bridge of doom! and I like the mean-ness to Nigel because I'm an angst freak (my friends actually do call me this) so you don't have to apologize or anything! I like this story a lot and am sad to hear that this is the penultimate chapter, but I can guess that the last one is going to be one crazy ride! |
| bookwrangler 2006-10-07 ch 10, | abuseAs always, well done. My stomach got the jitters. Look forward to the next part. Thank you. |
| katia1 2006-10-05 ch 10, | abuseThat chapter was beautifully written and I really enjoyed it. You create the fantasy world so well and I can picture the scenery in my mind. You weren't overly evil to Nigel - I've known meaner! All round good stuff and I look forward to the end. |