The story itself is okay, I like Carson and Liz.

But, no offence, you need a Beta!

Spelling and punctuation mistakes need to be looked at and corrected...

Good story otherwise.

I love the idea of Carson and Elizabeth having a relationship, and this story was cute but im going to have to say that I compleatly agree with Job...the dialog was unrealistic and the behaviour was out of character...but practice makes perfect! :D

it was ok but not great keep trying though

Very sweet! Anymore where this came from?

Ug why was the very, very painful dialog in italics? There was absolutely no reason for it. Actually since this whole story was painful to read with the out of character behavior and unrealistic dialog. Get yourself a new beta. The one you have now only enhances your mistakes.

That was so sweet! I especially loved the office scene at first. Really great. Carson is so nice!