shame you stopped writing this one it is a really great story be interesting what you'd do with it now

Please resume this story already!

Hi Jason,

Has somebody been neglecting his baby again? This is a great story and I've had the brain soap out for too long. It might be going bad. I'll buy some more when you post the next chapter.

Live Large,

pbow

I still haven'strayed from hope that you will update this Epic Tale of yours...

It just hard trying to wait for something that might never come. But I have hope...that you will bring this beautiful tale...such a fitting end. And I am sure that I am not the only who hopes for new life to this amzing tale.

I love this series what happened to it UPDATE

Wow. I didn't even realize this was still going! And oh boy! I can't wait to see what kind of shock it is that Ron gets!

an excellent story as always Z. So when's the next update coming?

hey Z, I just keeps chugging along. Engaged, prom's coming and graduation, and Shego still being a butt head. Keep it up.

Larry (Sentinel 1030

Im so glad you finally updated this story

Please keep the updates coming

love this story especially pulling Shego into this story

SHEGO ROCKS

whoo! awesome! can't wait for the next one dude!

i have been reading this through in one sitting and i gotta say that i am really enjoying this. i got all giddy and jumped for joy in a few parts hehe. cant wait for the next chappie.

Ernest.

Great job on the new chapter glad to see Kim getting back into the swing of things with the villanless missions. Also good to see that she still has that reckless hero syndrome that makes her oh so entertaining. Looking forward to the next chapter the need of that much brain soap always calls for some sure fire wackiness to ensue.

Ah, finally an update on this one. Nice to see Shego and Kim as sassy as ever and that rescue was a good boost in morale for Kim as long as nothing else goes wrong on the way to the hospital.

I feel sorry for the flood victims though since most hospitals don't have American standards of care and sanitation despite what the Moore film tried to portray. Of course if this were the actual TV series Kim would've just used her hairdrier on the flood and been done with it. I believe Kim once did say she stopped a flood with a hairdrier that is.

Well maybe one day we will see White Stripe return to harass Ron after Timothy North kicks the bucket. I could just see WS going off the deep end again when North dies. WS is also one of the few people that has ever gotten the better of Kim in battle. I bet Shego wouldn't fair to well against his stink stream either.

Great Chapter!

I'm glad you finally updated this.

Keep going!