moer coming? great chapter.

great chapter.

ficker and ficker, the plot becomes. great chapter.

intresting, fickening the plot. great chapter.

she wants to reclame her voice, am i corect? this question is rooted in the dream mentioned in the begining of this chapter. speeking of this chapter, it's great.

that put the giant toad in her place, MWAHAHAHAHAHA! you did read the order of the pheonix(number 5 of the harry potter books), am i corect? great chapter.

harry potterFMA, intresting. great start, and chapter.

okay, you have a good story here,but i really have a lot of trouble following whats going on in this thing

This story is awfully short but still enjoyable. I would also like to add that Envy has no gender. How else do you think Envy changes into women and men?

Loved it! Totally not clichéd, and actually hilarious at moments while still containing the story variables and keeping the plot in check. Kudos to you!

Keep writing,

Jake

it's a great story.

I read your notes at the beginning of Eternal Silence. You said you have a bad writing style (or something like that) but I disagree. I think it's perfectly normal. It's easy to read and that's one of the most important things to a story. (maybe this is just a story for a little 'light reading' as Hermione would say.)

I like what you did with the end. I can't explain it. Maybe because Ai could live a normal live.

As for the oneshots with hundreds of reviews... Those are really big exceptions. You shouldn't feel sad about it. Everyone started at some point and keeps getting better by practising. Maybe you'll be able to write said oneshot too. I'll give you a hint: Every good oneshot has to do with feelings. Play with some characters feelings. (That didn't sound the way I wanted it, but I hope you get my hint.)

So don't get sad, okay? I hate it when someone's sad.

Sasori

Exellcent story um just one question did anyone find Ed?

Or is he dead?

i know how it feels to not get enough reviews :(

anyways i realy love this story and i hope you update soon!

Sorry, I've just seen the fiction is complete! Oh no! _

A sequel? That's just a question lol