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| dudiwuda 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuseAhh I haven't commented yet?Bad for me! 'cos I've read this story the second time already and I liked it! Great sense of characters,very well put missing scenies. Displayed remarkable team dynamic and conversations. Thanks :) |
| feb04 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseliked it ! |
| iamdragonrider 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abusevery nice! |