omg i think i mite die ur not gonna write more...*falls to the ground*


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*snores*

Ya know, I just love this story. I admit, it is OOC, but I just love the fluff! I can hear Zuko actually saying that, as he's really sweet,though I'd be shocked.

Nice fic! XD

y? y o-dragon?y? y did every story i read today end with zuko leaving katara? sad... *tear* i just feel so sappy right now... darn u hormones! darn u 2 heck! but other than that it was pretty good. keep writn'. love ya'll! zutara all the way~! hey !

I say type another chapter

what the heck is angst?

You should definitly be proud of this one, it was great! Nice work!

Dak

So sweet and fluffy...

now THATS what I call a oneshot!

aw that was sweet. ^-^
YAY FOR ZUTARANESS!

I'm a sucker for love stories, and this one was extremly good!

u should have put another chapter.

o wow! that was awesome! thanx for reccomending it! by the way, thanx for reviewing my story! I've updated again! by the way great job, ur a good writer!

Aw...that's cute. You have a very nice writing style, especially when you described the man dying in front of Katara.

"One had reached up, grabbing hold on her dress with a bloodstained hand and looking up at her with a newly deformed head from the battle asking for water. But she didn’t have any. Before she could get the man to let go of her dress, his head lolled back and his grip loosened until he fell backwards and hit the ground unmoving."

Really excellent word usage there. I was going to say, that Zuko seemed OOC kind of, but when it turned out to be a dream I was like "Oh...skills" :D. It seems like a dream a young woman would have. Hoping for love and all. And the blue spirit thing was a nice touch at the end. Nicely done :D

Nice story. Well take your time writing the next one.

I loved it! And I almost cryed near the end...that's amybe I was listening to My Heart Will Go On performed by Celine Dion. But hey, what the heck. I loved it! I want to make a Zutara story of my own, I'm just trying to get ideas and help from other stories that I read. Your's was the best of all of them. I really enjoyed it, and I hope I can see more of your work.