Interestin' 'tis! You have quite the unique style of writing indeed, actually talking to your audience as opposed to straight storytelling...interesting choice.

Only one question, though...will there be more?

-Kalayzor

Good story so far. But You quote from the book/movie way to much almost every thing the fox said was what Mr. Beaver said, try to be a little more different from the book.

this sounds great! keep writing!

Krow

Hmm . . . interesting story! I think it's got spunk! Can't wait til you update!

Ha! When I clicked on the link for Chapter 3, I actually got a pop-up and the screen went all weird for a second - I'm not kidding! Very strange. *Eyes computer warily*

Anyway, this is really cool. I can't wait to see where you go with it. :)

cool update!I luv these books and movies!

aw this is gonna be so cool. i cant wait till the next update, i think i like alex better though. go nerdy kids!

woh o! please update soon! i lurve peter! he was so adorable! hehehehe! good job, alex sounds like he needs some fun! he'll find it in narnia!

YAY YOU!

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