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Taranea
2007-06-03 . chapter 1
huh, nice :)

the parts with the OCs from other stories weren´t very funny for outsiders, but you could skip them easily, so that was good.^^

"will angst for food" had me laughing out loud XD

i personally expected sonic to give her a kiss for christmas, but marriage...poor, poor hedgie. he should try to get AMY drunk on eggnogg so maybe she´ll have trouble remembering everything...overall, nice composition and some cool jokes.

good work! :)
Chaobaby95
2006-12-06 . chapter 1
LOL LOL LOL LOL POOR SONIC! HE DIDN'T GET AMY A PRESENT, AND HE ASKED HER FOR MARRIAGE! WHEN I SAW THAT, I sat motionless, and slapped ,my forehead...then I started laughing out loud...LOL!
Kryin
2006-01-04 . chapter 1
Phew, you had me worried there at the beginning. It was only a dream. *Relieved sigh* Tails has a point; gloves and shoes don’t really count as much for clothing. For some reason Knuckles speaking to the M.E. in baby talk seems disturbing, though I can easily see him doing it. Personally I think both Cream’s and her tag-along chao’s voices are really annoying. Wow, those were some great gifts Sonic got, not. Though you know Amy loved her ‘present’.

Like always it was great and so rib cracking (that’s sounds painful) funny.
C-Money17
2005-12-18 . chapter 1
Christ, this story was long. And that's good.

Many Sonic humor stories out don't really catch my eye, but this one sure as hell did. Funny and extremely descriptive (only a couple spelling errors), stories like this are what I look for to inspire me to come up with and write humor. I only have one story though, and I haven't updated in months (I'm such a lazy-**). Your story will definitely get my brain thinkin' to conjure up funny fictions of my own.

Well done! ^_^
Disjointed Silhouette
2005-12-18 . chapter 1
You sure know how to surprise people. From the humour to the serious, you are sure a jack of all trades. A master of all trades, to be exact.

Oh this one made me laugh. A lot. Especially the litte Golbez doll which keeps on saying irrelevant stuff, and how Sonic's stupid gifts actually pleased everyone. With the little warm Christamasy moral at the end; it was the thought that counts. Aw...

Another thing is that, amid the humour and such, you could actually keep the characters from becoming out of character. Amazing!

Ah well, Merry Christamas to you too. I'll try to get my spirits up and post some updates to my existing stories by Christamas. Who knows...

Keep it up with your excellent writing!
Golbezandcrew
2005-12-17 . chapter 1
LMAO!That was totally classical! I must say that it had me laughing so hard i was told to shut up on several parts XD I totally love how it all went, just so hilarious XD I dont know what else to say... It was written really well^^ But then when isnt your stuff written well? *shot*
Seshennu
2005-12-17 . chapter 1
Can I just say that that was probably the -best- Sonic humor ficlet I've ever read? Seriously, this was awesome. There were a couple spelling/grammar errors, but otherwise... Just wonderful!
+Fav, +C2
Sky's Penname
2005-12-16 . chapter 1
Wow, I must say, I didn't think you could make something so funny...
"My favorite color is Shadow!!"
That... I couldn't stop laughing. NEVER have I laughed so much from reading a story, that's pretty special all right! There was another part that made me laugh pretty hard, but I forgot what it was!! Oh well! Muhahahahaha! Freakin awesome!! Merry Christmas!! See ya!
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