Interesting idea, that Ollivander knows more. It almost sets him up to be inhuman or something. Also, an in character Amos. He was a proud father, indeed. Poor man.

This is amazingly beautiful and heartbreakingly tragic.

i dont usually read harry potters (dont ask) but i have to say, THIS IS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ! what an idea!... i just dont get the green eyes thing... but, far out! this story rules, thnx... siV

I like it... you were right, it is a bit strange. But I've always believed that there was something odd about Ollivander. Ever since I first read Harry Potter, I was always just like "ACK. That's dude's eerie..." xD You captured the essensce of Mr. Ollivander quite well. =)

Wow! i love it! i really like reading about harry potter charcters that have been overlooked. It allows the author's talents to expand, and thoughts to explore. Very nice job. No grammatical errords, no run-on sentences. Ollivander is somewhat of a Seer, eh?

~S.B

wow...wow...wow. i am speechless. got job. a little creepy but in a good way. is this a one-shot or are you planning to this for other characters as well cuz that would be awesome!

That was really quite good. I would love to read more from you. This is something I haven't seen before and it is very well done!
BRAVO!

I like it! Rather creepy, too, but great!;)

I really like this! it's a bit strange, actually, that's stories with Ollivander are so rare, I've always found him quite fascinating.

Pretty interesting approach!

awesome. ollivander is a creepy old man, but what perception! seriously, that was really good...poor cedric.

That was really good - I was surprised who you chose to give the wand to but that just made the story all the more potent. Really, really well done - I thought it was fantastic!