That was well-written. Hanabi's perspective was interesting and enjoyable to , Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief

so sweet

This is a very good piece of work. I loved how you made Hanabi's character out to be. It shows care between the two sisters. I also am glad that is written well. Often times you can come across an story that could be written much better, but this story needs no improvements, as it is already fantastic.

I like how determined Hanabi is in here and how protective she is of her sister, I would find that endearingly cute

Anyways, enjoyed reading this although its a one-shot, but hoped to see what Neji is going to do. Sequel perhaps?

This really brings up the question of human nature and what can be forgiven. Your writing is amazing.

Continue?

TTFN

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Dunno why, but I loved this!

Wow... Hanabi was harsh. But it is possible that she would hate Neji that much. Great writing.

Oh I liked it Somehow I feel happy, Neji couldn't see Hinata. *evil laughter*

wouw.

OMIGOD WATS THIS? incest? hinahana?

Great job! I really like how protective Hanabi is of Hinata, although you gotta admit she is being unnecessary and freaky... She was harsh to Neji too, all he wanted to do was apologize... oh well, as some people would say, it's out of my hands. Well, great job, anyway! Happy holidays!

Wow that was a great story. Poor Neji, he doesn't get any love.

Great story

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This was an interesting point of view, I think that Hanabi do not need to be the "bad sister" as many write her, but since she has not show how she really is, we have the free will to write about her personality, I like your story, the bon of Hinata and Hanabi was nice structured, nice work.