aw how sweet.

hey! this is great, write more!

wow nice J/Tk

YEsh JACEN&TENEL KA! lol great job nothing to critize

Nice fic! I'll put it on story alerts and hope that you update with the other two parts soon. There were a couple of places where the wording was strange (wouldn't TK have said "Of course it's not" instead of "Of course I'm not" in context?) and if by "deepest pools of green" you meant her eyes, her eyes are gray. These are really nitpicky things, though, and I like the story. :)