Greetings and salutations,

First off, congratulations on finishing this truly epic story. To be able to write a story as long as this one, as well as make it exciting and captivating, is no small task.

Overall, this story really surprised me. To be honest, I wasn't really that impressed with this story at the beginning but I decided to keep reading, and I'm incredibly glad that I did, because this story turned around and became amazingly compelling and far more fascinating.

Probably my favorite part of this story were the several different enemies that appeared. At first, I didn't really feel that the enemies were really much of a threat as they were minor irritants, and, in truth, most of the enemies seemed downright idiotic (why did Karatenmon wait for the digiwira to gain their powers and ultimate forms before attacking instead of just killing them off when he was first released?). Fortunately, though, the threats became more intense and dangerous, mainly when the Puaka generals and the dark shadow brethren took the stage.b I especially liked how all of the Darkshadow brethren had their own personalities that were completely different from one another, from the monk-like Doumon to the 1930's gangster/womanizer Astamon. The ascension of the darkshadows into the demon lords only made this factor even more epic. I will say that I don't think Lucemon came across as the most powerful of the demon lords. They talked about him being the strongest, but every time he showed up, he got his ** handed to him relatively easily, and I personally think that may have undermined him a little. Other than that, though, the suspense was definitely there.

I also liked how you made the story more intense and in depth, bringing the digimon enemies to the real world, then by adding in the curse tattoo, then the demon lords, the training of Adam, Aldiyamon Ruin mode, and finally the battle against Skullsatamon (both as himself and as Reapermon). I was really impressed with how you used the curse Tattoo in this story, how you mentioned it early on, and made references to it throughout the story, but still made it such an amazing event when it happened. I have to say, despite being pretty sure I knew what would happen, I was still shocked when Adam took the curse mark from JD. Furthermore, I loved how you used it in the end, with JD having the immunity, Persiamon getting "infected" herself, and then transferring that to Reapermon, thus giving the Digiwira a chance to defeat him. It was all very well executed.


I also noticed you seemed to tone down the Digiwira's powers in the later chapters, either by making their powers a little weaker and/or making the enemies stronger so as not to be affected as much. Overall this was a good Idea, at least in my opinion. In the beginning, it seemed that the powers the digidestined had were rather overpowered, but I'm gald you tuned it down later on. On the whole, the powers of the Digiwira seemed kind of hit and miss; Adam and Yiu Ling seemed to have the most generally useful powers (teleportation, shields, telekinesis, combustion) while Manny, JD, and Gayathri got powers that were kind of only be used for battle, and still didn't seem as effective as the others. Also, in my opinion, the giving of powers to the Digiwira seemed to kind of undermine the use and importance of the digimon, making the digiwira more useful that their partners and rendering the digimon almost useless. Being honest, this was probably the one part of the series that I liked the least, but it wasn't a deal-breaker or anything; the usage and abilities were creative and generally kept balanced, with the exception of Adam and Aldiyamon, who was kind of a Deus-ex-Machina-O-matic. Overall, it was something that I hadn't expected and, like the rest of the series, was well thought out and executed.

The last feature I'll mention in this review will be the ending. I think I can sum this up with one word...Awesome! The final fight between the Digiwira and Reapermon/ Skullsatamon was probably one of the greatest final battles that I've ever read in any fanfic, and possibly any book. I could mention everything that worked so well with it, but I think what set it apart from most other stories is that it didn't end with the cliche digimon ending, where one or all of the main characters' digimon ascending to the same level as Reapermon, but instead, dealt with weakening Repermon so much that he devolved back into Skullsatamon; essentially, they didn't instantly gain the power to reach his level, they just hit him with everything they had and weakened him back down to theirs. The addition of the trinity burst at the end was pretty cool as well. Throughout this entire story I was wondering why you gave the Digiwira digimon DNA ultimate forms, especially when they gained the Digital access ability only a few episodes after and could each become a stronger ultimate digimon. Now I know.

Overall, this story was great, and one of the best digimon fanfics that I've read. I can't wait to read you next story.

Thanks for you time. Loving your work.

From,
Dragonchad4

After reading this fic off and on for the past couple of months I can finlly say I've finished it. This is without a doubt one of the best digimon fics on this sight. Other than a few but understandable digivolution conflicts this was perfect in everyway. As for a favorite character or villian I'd have to say Astamon, mostly because Beezlemon is my favorite demon lord. Well it has been a fun ride and it has also inspired me to start working on my Digimon fic again, its called Card Crossed if you want to check it out. Well hopefully you'll keep writing.

O...M...G... This has got to be the BEST digimon fanfiction I have EVER read. I could hardly stop reading for 3 days! You are a great writer. I hope to see more of your work soon!

I wonder, about Dianamon and Appolomon base, where could it be? And how are they doing?
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Anyway, this story really inspired me to create my story, you know. Besides, its wonderful. Really. Too wonderful to say it in words.

Agumon and Penguinmon are the next partners of two more DigiWira...and I think I know who they are ^^ I'll be tuning in for more (and I absolutely LOVED the reference to JEM, Floramon is a genius)! ^_^

Oh, and here I thought that the only way for curing the curse tattoo was by making a suicide battle between Persiamon and Satriamon on the full-moon night, alone.

Never thought the cursed has transferred ability anyway.

"Life's not fair sometimes," and life cannot be paid as well.

Happy from the past,
Cherish by present,
and Death come tomorrow.

The sadness way to express their sacrificed for the price of protecting others. It is so sad that it cannot be stop or pretend to not cried.

This story, has made my heart, hurt. Or more to liked those who are, suffered.

I will never forget, those sufferers death.

Hey love the story but I have one question, what happens to Persiamon? I know she's reconfigured and such but really happens to her in the end?

Wow, you've really written this story good ^^ Loved the DigiSpheres and the alternate evolutions, I still say that those are pretty awesome concepts ^_^ Can't wait to read more!

Assalamu Alaikum brother...

Well... Nice job for finishing this story of yours. I basically loved it, and there were times were you kept me on my toes. The part I hated the most was the alternate universe with the 'Evil' Digiwira. I think you have an idea the part I loved the most, even though you didn't put much of it into Wira Digital, but that's still my favorite part. I apologize for not reviewing this earlier. Take care. Assalamu Alaikum...

- Scentomon

finally! i dont know what to say..
I am very happy that i can get out of my boarding school once a month, because it means that i can read Digiwira!. very nice id say..
hope u make other nice stories like this one!

I finally read all 80 chapters! It took me like 2 weeks. I'm glad I'm done! Sorry I didn't review. I was too busy typing Kimza Chronicles. Wira Digital was off the chain. Hope your other stories do just as good.

Plus, Battle Against Zephromon will continue as soon as Part 1 of Kimza Chronicles is finished. The story will get a major writing boost thanks to my dedication to Kimza Chronicles!

I hope you do very well.

Your fan, Ishiino Gerdo.

I never knew you were a Power Rangers fan, lol! Seriously, I found the ending excellent. No plotholes whatsoever. and your final words jolted my memory from a certain PROO Episode... Lol.

I really do hope to see a PR fanfic coming from you soon... But please do get on with Vengeance and Legends.

But do take time to relax and enjoy your birthday. Here's a happy birthday in advance!

An awesome final battle to the final chapter to a kick ** story! I loved all the allusions to the other seasons in this fic and it definitely seemed to cross all five seasons. The loss of the Juara digivices and the Wira's desire to keep fighting is reminiscent of the Digidestined in the first season despite losing their crests; the 'Trinity Burst' of the Tamers and the tales of the Tamer's partners (I especially liked the use of the Trinity Burst as I wasn't expecting it :P); the bit with Grademon appearing with the Wira's digivolved forms reminded me of the last episode of Frontier, and lastly the use of an ops makes me think of Data Squad. And of course there's the ever present 02. :D Nice job, however I am compelled to point out a couple instances where you misspelled 'matter' when describing the 'dark matter' that SkullSatamon used (you spelled it 'mater').
Nice to see the return of some old digivolved forms that we haven't seen in a while, particularly the DNA forms Reichmon and Lilymon, as well as the return of Sagittarimon Radiant Mode.
Ah...the happy ending that ends with the repair of the city, the discovery of all of those dead digimon reborn as eggs (looks like some digimon like Persiamon will finally get their second chance after all. I kind of liked that :P) and the talk with Grademon. Kind of nice actually, although it kind of stinks that the Wira lost so much of their powers. That's too be expected of course given the intensity of all the battles that they've fought throughout the course of the story.
Hm. You know, I never thought about that before...that bit with Grademon using the shield of Waja and how it could only be used for evil purposes. Somehow that slipped my mind. Weird.
Ah...JetSilphymon and Mistimon...or Shutumon and Sorcerymon. I was just starting to wonder what it was that had happened to them since they seemed to have dropped out of the story a while back. Nice to see that they get their final spotlight in the story...and grew a few brain cells too by sheer luck. If it weren't for the fact that they were evil I'd find them as being quite likeable as far as comedy relief villains go. But now they go off into that lovely sunset at the end of the story as becoming grand evil overlords. To each their own I guess. Somehow though I'm certain that they too will meet their end.
Some interesting bits at the end. I chuckled at Adam and Dina's conversation with each other. Gotta love that husband/wife teasing. :P Go Adam for skipping engagement and getting married right away. Come to think of it, that probably the most sensible thing he's done all story. XD
The ending was kinda 02ish in my opinion, but better then 02's ending was by a long shot because it didn't show the characters as necessarily living 'happily ever after'with dream jobs (not saying that your characters didn't do too bad for themselves though :P) and clone kids. They still have their regular set of problems, and are still doing their duty. Things aren't perfect for them and a new adventure looks to be on the rise even if we don't get the story as to what happens next. And that I know that I can be content with. It sort of leaves things to the imagination and not a final note on the story.
'Big and puffy version of Gayathri'. Laughed at that. Man, her and Manny didn't exactly waste time did they? Two at once? Oog. I may be a guy, but I can sympathize with her wanting to deliver her kids at that stage of her pregnancy. It doesn't look particularly comfortable and my Mom likes to joke about when she had me. Snickered at Liu Ying's giving a worried at JD when hearing about Gayathri's pregnancy too. Oy. *Shakes head in amusement*
I noticed that JD mentioned something about Agumon and Gallantmon...I take it that Agumon has achieved Gallantmon as a Mega evolution now?
Again, a nice ending to your story, and I thank you for creating such an awesome story and presenting it to us. It's definitely been a pleasure, and an honor to read this story. Wira Digital forever!
-Crazyeight

Ahh, it's finally over. I'm so betting there's gonna be a sequel for some reason >_>
I'd say I'm quite satisfied. I don't think there's anything missing, IMHO.
Hope to hear from you soon.~