i think it would be so fucking funny if you plagerized this shit too.
just so you know, you're fucking young.
how old are you, like, fourteen? omg, you're so gay.
i'm fucking seventeen and i can beat you're fucking ass.
just try me.
haha, this is fun.
but seriously, you diaperwearing baby, delete MY story or give me credit, loser.

Its pretty

it's good, but i think you need to put some more at the beginning. like why inuyasha was verbally assulting kagome, and who hurt her in the first place.