Don't leave us hanging. What happens next?

Very Sweet.

More?

Neeri

this is so cool i love Harper/Trance stories and for once it isn't Harper who's hurt too. please continue soon :)

oh, you have to go on with this, you cannot do this to me, OMG, please continue(yes I know, Im kinda hyper, but its that or extremely depressed) please go on this is so good.

Great story we need more u must finish it or add on to it.

please continue

Are you ever gonna finish this? I really want to find out how it ends.

pretty good so far

So what happens next? If that's how it begins, and then how it is, then how will it be? I'm dying to find out!

Ineteresting but.. why does she just collapse? And when did Trance get the ability to just pop up out of nowhere... she has the ability to *SEE* other realities, not exist/not exist in them. And why does she out of the blue collapse in a heep on the cold hard floor. Details, we need details!

Hey, cool story so far. I really hope you finish it. I love the ideas

of Trance and Harper together. I also love Dylan and Rommie together, thos 2 couples are just really right for each other.

i'm liking this so far!

and i do hope no one sues you *l*

You can't just leave it at that. You are going to go on, aren't you?

I love it so far. continue soon.

you should really continue this