Its a great read, please continue!

Very intersting. I am enjoying it thus far.

cool oh so very cool. keep it up girl ur on a roll! lol

good i really like it! Keep up the good work

very good keep it up! oh tell ur laptop to behave it's self or i'll come round with the baseball bat and make it beahve understand i want this to continue! AND IT WILL!hahahahaha.

Please finish this! I am getting into this!

Good story, just a couple of things though. "Prior" not "Pryor", "Tok'ra" not "Tok'rah", and it's not a very likely thing for realities to be out of sync temporally. I mean, infinite realities so yeah it would happen. But basically the only defined way it'd happen in the Stargate universe is if someone had used that Ancient time loop device for an extra two years in the reality of your creation. Also, there's not really much point in having multiple Stargates in the same place on the same world, so you might want to suggest the reason behind that later.

really enjoyed the story so far, I like the fact that ya brought in new characters to go with SG1

wow i am very interested by this now update! i wish to read more!

This is an interesting idea. It's kind of wierd having Jack and Cam, but I love Mitchell, so it's perfectly fine with me. I like the suspense with who the heck Lisa and Maria are. Keep it up!

I do not mind Cameron and Jack both in it. But Jack was heading the SGC and is now under the command of General Landry... because he back on SG 1?

I am sorry but if Jack was not losing rank or something that concept seems odd.

Where ever Jack was... I think it was Washingtion doing something like Homeworld security or so.

Even it that has all the markings for Sam Jack ship, which I mostly so doesn't like but read if the story is good, I would love to see a lot more chapters.

Nice beginning, I'd love to read more soon. Thank You!

* shivers *

Really good ideas. Nice background and setup.

I'm looking forwards to more.

Liked very much. My opinion was that they doesn't have done enough with the ATA gene (Atlantis spin-off not counting, I like it). So Jack and Daniel with adopted daughters that means slash. Don't worry I don't mind one bit as I love them as pair whatever friendship or romantic relatonship as much as like Jack centric ones.

Hopeful this time you will continue it to end.