|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| SubtleFighter 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! Especially how you got inside Lex's mind about why things started to go wrong for him and Lana. I also just read the sequel and prequel and they're both very good. |
| AnnLaw 2006-01-26 ch 5, | abuseWow. This was really good.There was something subtlely profound about it...Nice! |
| Johnny Superfecta 2006-01-26 ch 5, | abuseInteresting look at the future ramifications of "Lexmas". Lex's internal wrangling and the dinner scene with Clark and Chloe were particularly good, I thought. I liked the music references in the first three chapters; perhaps you might've put some into the final two, to continue the theme? |
| Reeny 2006-01-22 ch 5, | abusebeautiful, angsty story thats very well written. I really like that you used Lexmas in there as well! |
| Sassy Soprano 2006-01-22 ch 5, | abuseBeautiful! |
| thessaly fuchsia 2006-01-21 ch 5, | abuseThis is really great so far! |
| chloedouble1028 2006-01-21 ch 5, | abuseoh good. a happy ending. lol nice job |
| Danae 2006-01-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is fascinating! Their dynamic is so interesting. The symphony served as a perfect vehicle for giving us a picture of their marriage. I particularly liked your description of Lex's motivations and interactions. Please continue! |
| LexLanaLove 2006-01-19 ch 1, | abuseWe need more good Lex/Lana fics. Please write more. |
| GinaRenee 2006-01-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou're a really good writer! Keep it up! |
| rnelso1 2006-01-07 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story. Please write more! |
| chloedouble1028 2006-01-07 ch 3, | abuseoh so thats how it happened? he was saving someone lana you idiot! lol sorry, i'm slightly prejudicial against lana, but great story, continue |
| Johnny Superfecta 2006-01-05 ch 3, | abuseThis is really good; I look forward to seeing what you do with it. |
| Athena 2005-12-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh poor Lexana! I do hope things get a bit happier for them in your story! |
| kj 2005-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abusepete...what is his significance in the story |