That was a thrilling short tale of the last two minutes of a man's life. Going out as a hero.

That was great! A lot of people might have tried to over-sentimentalize this moment, but telling it from George's perspective, it just demands a different voice. I think you got his sardonic humour perfectly down.

xD I really liked it! Mason had been one of my favorite characters right from the start, even when he acted as a sonuvabee... But this fanfic really portrayed his thoughts, and showed the human and kind side of George that little take the time to bother to think about. Keep up the good work.

This was very insightful and creative...I don't think anyone else has covered this, so it was a nice change. I really liked the semi-last line:
He's taken so much, and now he's giving everyone in Los Angeles one gift. Life.

great story. I really liked the way you descibed george's POV on the situation. Good work. keep it up.