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Reviews for: Over the Wall
superlazygirl 3/21/07 . chapter 1
I just realized that I have never reviewed this story! *facepalm*

I LOVE IT SO MUCH.
Jazzy Uchiha 7/2/06 . chapter 1
THAT WAS SO CUTE!
Warg 6/27/06 . chapter 1
Hey..

Nice work here..

Short, tender story. The boy's are very realistic, in their quarreling and their protectiveness and also the older Tomu bossing Yoshi around..

Family life in the Wolve's Den.. nicely captured.. now to read the prequal.. _

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anreg 5/2/06 . chapter 1
Delightful glimpse into a day in the life of the Saitou household! I can't help but smile at your subtle hints about how the parents spent some of their time that day.
lolo popoki 2/13/06 . chapter 1
Sorry it took me a while to get to reviewing! I really enjoyed this fic :) I thought you did a great job with the kids; I found them realistic and very cute.

"'I bet they’re kissing,' Yoshi said, his voice filled with loathing at even saying that word.

Two pairs of eyes rolled skyward as both boys let out an agonized, 'Eew!'"

*snickers* I remember having that same reaction when I saw or even thought about my parents kissing :D And I had to really laugh at Saito and his wife fooling around in the bathhouse. Cute story!
SilverInches 2/4/06 . chapter 1
*laugh*

Silly boys! They're just too cute!

Awesome job. I think that this is very much in the spirit of Omasu's stories!

*claps!* I like it!

Kasi.
Mibu's Wolf 1/30/06 . chapter 1
this is a cute story, the boys were the best part. )
Menolly Harper 1/18/06 . chapter 1
Aw that's cute!

I hope you write another Saitou/Tokio fic!

I've read In the Wolves' Den and Tokio's Wedding before and I loved them.

So to see that this is kind of a sequel I checked it out.

I'm very pleased with it as well, I'm glad you wrote it!

Menolly
Miburo Kid 12/20/05 . chapter 1
Aw, the boys were cute. That was a nice sequel.
omasuoniwabanshi 12/19/05 . chapter 1
I loved it. That's exactly how I imagined Tokio and Saitoh would be as a married couple. It was very cute, and the children, Tomu and Yoshi, were pitch perfect in their quarreling and the way Tomu took charge and bossed his little brother around. I'd have to say my favorite bit was when Hajime said:

“It seems that tree climbing and wall jumping runs in the family,”

Thanks for the tribute! You can write sequels to my stories any time you'd like!
Puppybaddog 12/18/05 . chapter 1
hehehe sweet little fic...:)
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