Great story. I think you sould keep going with it. I actually sang that song to my girlfriend just before i left for boot camp and then again before a 6th month deployment. this story hit close to my heart. A man who can't just let others in the world suffer and a woman he can't take with him... i really hope you continue this story.

Omg, I can see why you cried, or almost cried. I almost cried myself. It's so sweet! So sad!

Awome! Loved it!

Not bad. Predictable and full of fluff, but certainly not bad. I do think that you should say who wrote the song though.

aaw wonderful

aww, i understand why you cried writing it, it was very sweet. i love the ending where he secretly slips the ring on her finger. well done :)

A cute quick read

This was AWESOME! I am so honored that you dedicated it to me! It was so sweet how he was singing to her and then he gave her the ring. And then they went back to doing things like normal as if nothing out of the ordinary had happened. It was an amazing story and you are a really great writer. You totally captured the moment and I loved it!

Great job!

Kylie