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SnapeChronicles
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
I could really feel the tension and emotion in this story. Brilliantly rendered.
joanne
2007-09-21 . chapter 1
Just lovely...
fireflies-flicker
2006-12-30 . chapter 1
brilliant.
and very sensuous.

Hermione seems so fragile at first.
but I'm glad she gave in to Severus.
and that they were both happy in the end.

great job.
Subversa
2006-12-27 . chapter 1
I love this story. Hermione's reasoning, that she could prevent herself from being hurt by lavishing sexual attention upon him, whilst withholding herself from *his* touch, was an interesting one. I can sort of follow her line of thought. It would be irresistable to a man like Severus, however - he would be driven to have her, having experienced the pleasure she could bring to him, having been that vulnerable to her - oh, yes. She could not have more surely ensnared him had she planned to do so.

I wonder if she did?
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2006-08-02 . chapter 1
Beautiful, simply beautiful.
.the.gold.in.the.shadow.
2006-07-14 . chapter 1
great story! i really enjoyed the thing about touch, i've never though obout it that way. i loved it.
Droxy
2006-05-13 . chapter 1
Lovely, romantic and very inspiring. Interesting angle on the touch, a bit of angst to edge the romance.
LetTheGoodTimesRoll
2006-05-08 . chapter 1
Absorbing. Moving. Powerful. stomache-squirmingly wonderful.
Megan Consoer
2006-04-06 . chapter 1
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
BrightSide of Nowhere
2006-03-10 . chapter 1
Aww... that was a cute ending. It was an interesing story line too.
Elizabeth Choi
2006-02-08 . chapter 1
This deserves so much more reviews. Good job - and VERY unique idea. I saw this on WIKTT under The No-AFF challenge, and I'm glad I did.
Jenna Black
2006-01-04 . chapter 1
Bravo, thank you for a wonderful story.
Fair Maiden
2006-01-01 . chapter 1
So sweet! I really liked it.
Gingerbread
2005-12-29 . chapter 1
oh, gosh, what a pity i'm all alone... oh.
Wannabebetty
2005-12-24 . chapter 1
You have a beautiful writing style... even if the subject matter was a little much for me. I did enjoy reading it though, you have a way of grabbing the readers attention and commanding they sit and read through it all. Very nice... Thanks for posting it!
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