 SnapeChronicles 2008-09-03 . chapter 1I could really feel the tension and emotion in this story. Brilliantly rendered. |
 joanne 2007-09-21 . chapter 1 Just lovely... |
 fireflies-flicker 2006-12-30 . chapter 1brilliant.
and very sensuous.
Hermione seems so fragile at first.
but I'm glad she gave in to Severus.
and that they were both happy in the end.
great job. |
 Subversa 2006-12-27 . chapter 1I love this story. Hermione's reasoning, that she could prevent herself from being hurt by lavishing sexual attention upon him, whilst withholding herself from *his* touch, was an interesting one. I can sort of follow her line of thought. It would be irresistable to a man like Severus, however - he would be driven to have her, having experienced the pleasure she could bring to him, having been that vulnerable to her - oh, yes. She could not have more surely ensnared him had she planned to do so.
I wonder if she did? |
 ~ 2006-08-02 . chapter 1 Beautiful, simply beautiful. |
 .the.gold.in.the.shadow. 2006-07-14 . chapter 1great story! i really enjoyed the thing about touch, i've never though obout it that way. i loved it. |
 Droxy 2006-05-13 . chapter 1Lovely, romantic and very inspiring. Interesting angle on the touch, a bit of angst to edge the romance. |
 LetTheGoodTimesRoll 2006-05-08 . chapter 1Absorbing. Moving. Powerful. stomache-squirmingly wonderful. |
 Megan Consoer 2006-04-06 . chapter 1I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please? |
 BrightSide of Nowhere 2006-03-10 . chapter 1Aww... that was a cute ending. It was an interesing story line too. |
 Elizabeth Choi 2006-02-08 . chapter 1This deserves so much more reviews. Good job - and VERY unique idea. I saw this on WIKTT under The No-AFF challenge, and I'm glad I did. |
 Jenna Black 2006-01-04 . chapter 1Bravo, thank you for a wonderful story. |
 Fair Maiden 2006-01-01 . chapter 1So sweet! I really liked it. |
 Gingerbread 2005-12-29 . chapter 1 oh, gosh, what a pity i'm all alone... oh. |
 Wannabebetty 2005-12-24 . chapter 1You have a beautiful writing style... even if the subject matter was a little much for me. I did enjoy reading it though, you have a way of grabbing the readers attention and commanding they sit and read through it all. Very nice... Thanks for posting it! |