|Reviews for Absent Heartbeat|
| sapphireswimming 8/7/12 . chapter 1
Oh goodness. This is so powerful. It make me feel like crying. I will never look at this scene in the same way again. It was already tragic... but this takes it to a whole new level!
| Al's-best-friend 6/8/07 . chapter 1
It was very good. Got me thinking
| NutBuster 12/23/06 . chapter 1
Gosh, this was just cruel and true. xD Poor Al.
Saw this episode and went "omfg, NOO."
Keep writing! :D
| Domenic 4/7/06 . chapter 1
...Going on favorites.
(Other spellings for our favorite snak chimera: Marta, Martel, and Martyl.
| DeletedGoneGoodbye 2/22/06 . chapter 1
What a beautiful protrayal from Al's point of view. You captured the moment perfectly and it was very easy to understand and feel what Al was experiencing with Marda inside him alive and then dead. Thank you for this.
| skovstilhed 2/9/06 . chapter 1
She's not dead, squire. She's uh, pinin' for the fjords.
Heh sorry, couldn't resist. I have to say though excellent job. I'd reccomend maybe reworking a few of the last lines, they seem kind of redundant (especially "But inside a heart stopped beating within him") but on the whole, great job.
| Story Weaver1 12/24/05 . chapter 1
I wondering when a MardaAl fic was going to pop up. Excellent job
| SenshiAlchemist 12/18/05 . chapter 1
Oh my God! I wish I could write as well as you can. I just saw that episode last night! I already knew about the Furher (sp?) but I didn't know Marda was going to die! :( This story is so beautiful though. It sounds so real, the way you get into Al's thoughts! I love reading your stories. Good job! Keep writing!
| Crysania Fay 12/18/05 . chapter 1
Wow! That's depressing... Though I like it. The anime version wasn't as good as the manga one though...