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| VampCaro 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseA great story. Its a shame its not been finished. I would love to know how it ends. |
| Cosmic Castaway 2007-07-30 ch 20, | abuseSadden to see this was never finished :( but great to read and at least we know Grissom and Nick made it out, unscratched is a different story. Great work, I think you had everybody's voices down pat and I really dislike Garza. Great job and maybe some day you'll get to finishing this wonderful story ;) |
| keltiksgirl 2007-07-04 ch 20, | abusehi will there be more to this story i hope so... |
| MoonMadKitty 2007-01-05 ch 20, | abuseThis is a lovely, well-thought out and excellently written story. I'm very envious of your in-house beta and must find ways to either clone her or steal her! The character mood descriptions are particularly good, in my opinion: you manage to convey an entire setting with very few words or a simply painted image. Overall, very nicely done. |
| sally88 2006-03-27 ch 20, | abuseso glad you're back. i was really worried that we wouldn't be seeing you again. as usual another great chapter. this story is going really well. hope to be seeing more soon. bye. |
| rozzy07 2006-03-26 ch 20, | abuse...>Wipes brow in relief that the dreaded 'writers block' has now lifted for you!> Your OC Garza is such a vicious creation, his sole intent to bring down Grissom & Nick, and his battle of wits with Catherine as she made him tow the line when he searched their homes was great. Nick & Griss need someone like Catherine to stay fighting in their corner. Now, please, more soon!! |
| krysalys 2006-03-24 ch 20, | abuseOh yeah, I sure hope that Nick and Gil file complaints against Garza for his behavior, and that the jackass gets reprimanded... or at the very least, he has to make a formal apology. Especially if he leaks to the press that he's investigating two memebrs of the night shift CSI's for being crooked. Oh yeah, that'll get his ** kicked by Brass. Heh. If anyone knows what it's like to be a whistleblower on bad cops, it's Jim Brass. *BEG* No matter the reasons, I'm glad you're back, hon. ANother excellent chapter, and I look forward to the next. -}-@ Krys |
| DaVinci13 2006-03-24 ch 20, | abuseHey, you don't have to apologize! I know all about RL and writer's block. :( Ugh. And its a great chapter! I love how Catherine is doing her best to protect both Grissom and Nick, making sure Garza doesn't fake anything just to make his case. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, whenever you may post it. Keep up the great work! :P |
| Duchess192 2006-03-24 ch 20, | abuseumm... |
| mtee1958 2006-03-24 ch 20, | abuseIt's been so long -- ooh - how I hate that man!! Good work, as usual. Will be waiting for the next installment. |
| Kristen999 2006-03-24 ch 20, | abuseWow. I'm happy to see an update, thought this story was forever lost. Your IA Captain is certainly an **, hope we can some satisfaction at the end of something truely evil, but we'll see. Catherine was spot on, at each home, protecting intrests barley contained anger. Can't wait for another, longer chapter. Glad things have calmed down for you. |
| kimonkey7 2006-03-24 ch 20, | abuseWelcome back! Glad to see the post, and even happier to find I won't be left in the air with this story. You've jumped right back in and it's great and tense and...well, I know it will keep coming the same way. Keep well, and keep posting. This story must continue. Gr. Garza. |
| Polgana 2006-03-24 ch 20, | abuseYea! You're back, and with another wonderful chapter. I love the way Catherine was all over that jerk. Great work. Hope your personal life has gotten back to whatever passes as normal. (Normal: an obcure concept that is open to individual interpretation.) |
| wraiths-angel 2006-03-24 ch 20, | abuseo. well i hope that he odesan't find one or both pf them guilty, lookin gfroward t0o the next chapter! |
| sherryw 2006-03-24 ch 20, | abuseGo Catherine. That Garza is such a jerk! I bet he's the one that needs to be investigated. *grr* Great chapter even with the writer's block. Looking forward to the next one. Oh and I can't wait until Nick and Grissom get their revenge on this guy. (they are going to get revenge...right?) |