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| Auntiem5 2008-07-11 ch 7,  | abuseI seem to believe that this is all happening...and totally that it came from an author's mind...I am seeing all the faces. Great...my favorite line here..when Palmer asks Jack of the whereabouts of the man who is threatening him: "He passed away."...cute haha...I am not liking the warehouse...I never like the warehouses...ok, I am ready. |
| Auntiem5 2008-07-11 ch 6, | abuseGreat!! I am starting to hold my breath... |
| Auntiem5 2008-07-11 ch 5, | abuseI could see this coming...Tony the perfect match!!...fine way to get Tony back on the job!! "Did they laser your brain this morning Jack?!"...this may be the last calm hr of this story! ok, here goes. |
| Auntiem5 2008-07-11 ch 4, | abuseApprehending Smith..seemed easy...Interrogating Smith..seemed easy...Jack style! Oh, death by train on the track. Palmer's head. Where is Alice Cooper when you need him!!..Poor Mark!!..should be somebody chasing Jack..we'll see...this is great! |
| Auntiem5 2008-07-11 ch 3, | abuseAll's well. Predictable. Great to have Tony added to the team. Then the last line, the very last line...Talk about the chance to see HEAD'S ROLL! lol David Palmer's head. Oh, good writing! you got me going...what, 21 hrs. to go OMG Question for the author: what is a soft perimeter around the hotel? |
| Auntiem5 2008-07-11 ch 2, | abuseA fast read!...I want to know about Audrey..hm. So far so good. I am intrigued! |
| Auntiem5 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseA good start...about as calm as things can be in the lives of these people...got a feeling it's all about to end or begin!!...I liked the start of a normal day...even Jack checking up on Tony. |
| numbnuts 2008-05-20 ch 24, | abuseBrilliant fic! I love it!! |
| braeo 2007-05-17 ch 17, anon. | abusei absolutely appreciate your writing. This is a very entertaining story and you should continue to write more. You have a good balance of action, angst, etc. Well done |
| king6475 2007-01-20 ch 24, | abuseThis is one of the best 24 stories I've ever read. Of course, I've only read a few, but I loved the plot and the characters here. The dialogue was good too, especially since everyone seemed to say "Fine." a lot. Nice job. |
| .jc.loves. 2006-12-26 ch 3, | abuseOMFG!david palmers head! i wonder if hes gonna do it humm. what does jack want to know?this chapter was great |
| .jc.loves. 2006-12-26 ch 2, | abusei love this chapter. cant wait to read what happens now that tony's elping jack again |
| .jc.loves. 2006-12-25 ch 1, | abusei loved this chapter it was very good. cant wait to read more:D |
| mirel 2006-11-10 ch 24, | abuseThat is just mean! You are going to end this story with that? I really hope you write a seguel! I have really liked this story,it is one of the best's. It feels weird that it has gome to the end... But great story, you are a wonderful writer! |
| Radwa 2006-11-08 ch 24, | abuseTHAT is the last chapter?At least tell me there will be a sequel.I'm dying to know what will happen to Tony.I'm not sure how I feel about Hammond's death.I kinda wanted him to go to prison to know what he did to Tony.All in all,a great chapter and can't wait for the sequel(hint,hint) |