Reviews for These Haunted Halls

pony's girl
2005-12-29
ch 1, anon.

abuseHi, i actually haven't read this story, but it is the one you have most currently updated so i hope you read this. i'm a big outsiders fan. lord of the rings isn't really my thing (although the 3rd movie was AMAZING!)anyway, i read your stories "close your eyes", "flight 162", and "shadows". i was upset to see they were not completed. they were excellent to the point they stopped. i love your oc jenny.they were just getting to the best part, so i was wondering if you could finish. just a request.~pony's girl

Lady Luce
2005-12-22
ch 1,

abuseThis is good, you may want to change the ages at the top seeing as one year in elven years is equivalent to 144 human years. But that is a minor error and not enough to spoil everything. It is very good though and well written.

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