Not even a kiss?

Beautiful. Shuichi's sadness was so well portrayed that it brought tears to my eyes. So solemn, but cute, much like the snow that falls during it. And I loved how in character you kept Yuki. Great job!

Yeah, it was pretty damn fluffy. But it could only be overly-so if Eiri would stop being such a damn tool and be nice to Shuichi.

AH! THE FLUFFYNESS BURNS! Sheese, now your making it so I have to start reading Gravatation...

VEry nice Leeren! I like it loads, even if I have never ever read nething Gravitation. Great job! =D

OMG! I loved it! Awesome story!