 The Silver Feathered Raven 2005-12-18 . chapter 1Very cute, I have to give it that. Pretty well written, cute, fluffy...I suppose that describes it. I have to say, though, that I felt it was slightly out of character for Kougaiji. It could just be that he is good at hiding what he is feeling, and since this seemed to be mostly from inside his head...
I would have liked more of the story to take place when he reached Yaone, however.
Still good. I enjoyed it.
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