Sad. I don't like the description, but the story was very good. I think you rushed a bit on the anti-NaruSaku. Just kidding. :P

aw so sad!poor naruto

This very good short story.
But what would be ever better if you did a recap of the events leading to the final addmission from sakura. Sort of like review of narutos now immortal life until sakura's death. You know, expand the story and add more chapters.

Poor Naruto, a fox demon who happens to watch his childhood crush pass away of old age. Man that would suck. It's a good one shot, really portrays the scene.

Sad...

Aw

I'm a Naru/Saku fan and I thought it was beautiful. I don't understand why you think the pairing is gross but oh well i won't get into that. I like it alot because it explored the path not taken. Thanks for writing it.

Poor Naruto, and an Enternally youthful Naruto might be an outcome of the Kyuubi n' stuff.

I like this, even though it had bits of Naruto/Sakura. Blech.

That was so simple, yet so touching. You managed to fit so much meaning into so few words. It truly touched me to read this.

-MeeLee