Aside from spelling 'Phoenix' wrong in the title...I liked it. Not a huge FLCL fan, but I know enough about the characters to understand this. I rather liked it.

Plus, I like the fact that you can write decent poems. Kudos for you. (I couldn't write anything this good if you held a knife to my throat.)

that was cool, and described her feelings well.

i loved it. you really have talent. thank you for reviewing my story. :)