 Nightblade121 2009-01-10 . chapter 1Funnily amusing. (And I don't think "funnily" is even a word. O_o)
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 GreyJedi 2006-08-18 . chapter 1 Okay. Strange, weird, unusuall. I don't think that metalheads have that kind of instinct, the one where they automatically assume the first thing they see is their parent. This was a REALLY strange story, I thought it was, um, WAY outside the box. I prefer your other stories, this one wasn't that bad, but it was confusing, and a little hard to follow. You might want to aim for better clarity if you write another one like this, just for future reference. |
 Hold on hero 2006-02-24 . chapter 1 IT WOULDN"T LET ME REVEIW LAST NIGHT! Anyway my cuzin Kim and cuz Amy say hi to you. Yes hi to you. Funni storie...
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 Mr. D 91 2006-02-14 . chapter 1'Ahh shut up! You take-over-the-world freaks are all the same. Been there done that brought the T-shirt got the CD!'-Daxter
Oh, that line was funny.
Kewl. I'd say what this is a parody of, but I'm too lazy to say the whole name.
I agree. Who'd have thought it?
At first, I thought that five/four super inteligent Metal Heads would be piloting the robot. Instead, you made Daxter a mother towards a bunch of scorpions. I hate scorpions! Uhh...I'll make an excaptance in this case. Don't wanna hurt Daxter's feelings after he saved the city.
Well, cya. I know it won't be long until I read another fanfic by you with extreme randomness. |
 Sanctus Sanguis 2005-12-20 . chapter 1Quick-demon, it's been a while since I've seen you around.
And what a hilarious story to find too.
Plus it was good humor, not complete randomness.
See ya around.
Sanctus Sanguis
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 Draegoness 2005-12-19 . chapter 1Aw, Torn's such a party pooper! :( Anyway, I loved the story. And as much as I liked the monkeys, I think I liked the metal heads better! ^_^ I would have never imagined such a wierd combination :P Well done! |
 Kire Nosnah 2005-12-19 . chapter 1 It was interesting. However, it was too short, and no offense whatsoever, but I didn't really think it was that good. |
 LunarSquirrel 2005-12-19 . chapter 1^_^ This is weird but great! I love then name 'Superhero Metal Head Team Hyper Force GO'! The grammar could be improved, but it was otherwise good, well done! |
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