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| Kiko Kamia 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuse^.^ you must have spent a long time working on this, and it shows! great job! |
| YourXFirefly 2005-12-27 ch 1, | abusethis is not a flame repeat this is NOT a flame...constuctive critism. Alot of the syllabls were off and some of the words just didn't sound right or make sense. Give it another shot or something and maybe you'll have something really good...maybe. Also you can't count this as a flame cause I was nice about it so HA...hee hee no I kid. Any ways try again or write something new. I LOVE YOU |
| aishah 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was a very fresh break from the usual song. Merry Christmas to you too! |
| csi-sam-sanders 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abusewow this is rele gd n brought a smile 2 my face! have a gd xmas!! |
| cinderella2122 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abuseit was good and funny |
| CinnamonFaerie 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Very creative. |