interesting... it took me a while, i admit, to thumb through it, but i'm glad i did. the ending was soft, to me, and that was good. at first i was displeased that you started quoting the game and going through the scenes play-by-play, but when i got through half of it, i changed my mind. the small twists of each scene, each part of the story, how tidus is getting used to spira and its customs, wakka and his actions, the mission to stop sin, etc etc... i like how it all spins together. nothing was too bold or strong, and tidus was still kept in character for the most part, i think. you did a pretty good job. ^_^ for slapping together something that was originally in frags, it's not that bad. three cheers for you!

I love it!!

update please

lol

It's amazing how you managed to rein in how alien a whole different world can be, with different traditions and customs, and managed to squish it into this fic. Interesting pairing and interesting writing!

Very deep - I really loved what you developed and how you did it. Great job!^^

Loved the story. So cute :). Although, the Yuna thing, while necessary, made me sad. Seperated the best couple ever.

The handshake thing rocked so much, by the way :).

I really like this story, I think the handshake ordeal is so unique and interesting. Your characterization of Wakka is perfect, especially his actions and way of thinking.

Love it. =)

What a perfectly delightful concept. You have skillfully invented an entire cultural pattern and it works! The idea of freely offered love across the spectrum changes the whole image of Spira. Just lovely. I see a reflection of your invented language in your freshly defined gestures.

Your dialogue is uncommonly well handled in this story. You've come a long way, baby. *prolonged applause*

I like the episodic method you use here. It feels like lightning striking almost at random and illuminating the various moments. This is a charming holiday gift to your readers. Thank you.