Cool one shot

It's a cute Sai and Sakura story!
Aw...
Your english is good. There are a few errors in some spots, but they're hardly noticeable!
Good job!

cool could you make a story with sakura trieds to get sai to notice her, or saskue fights for sai over sakura

This chapter was cute!! i liked it, update soon!

you write good in english too ^^ this story was very cute

very awesome. although Sai CAN be such a prick sometimes...

Cute!

wow..um...it was a good plot actually...but the way you put it was kind weird...maybe you should try to capture different types of words to expand the imagery in your writing...

its just the way this is written is simple, but the words chosen aren't the best...

GOOD PLOT! :D

Very good.

I LIKE IT , IT WAS O.K.

loved it^_^

Aww! That was so cute! Nicely done!

Ah, so you're not very good at English... it doesn't show much. I only found a few errors in this fic, but really, you can express yourself in English. ^^ A little bit more practice, and I'm sure you'll be able to perfect English.

>_< Take it from me, English isn't my native tongue either. Although my country requires (optional) that everyone should know how to speak English (since we were once an American Colony).

Oh well, enough of that.

I really loved this one, it was a fluffy SaiSaku! ~_~ (which makes me feel happily tingly inside!)

You kept the characters very well intact with their personalities. ^^ You even did the fluffy part without much OOCness.

Nice work! ^^

::Releina Artemis::

He was actually acting as he has feelings... weird, but I like it

Cute!