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lovova
2009-09-01 . chapter 30
In the immortal words of Stan Marsh...Holy shit, dude.

I...I really just don't know how to react to this. The ending is so amazing and yet at the same time so agonizingly -frustrating-, and I just want to go back and re-read the whole story just to see if I can make any damn sense of it. This, this was torturous and wonderful to read through the whole time. I want to write a long, deep, complex review, but at the moment I am just too...stunned. Stunned is the right word.

Great job. Truly excellent.
the Leander
2009-05-22 . chapter 30
Wow. I spent several hours today reading this story and I am damn impressed. It was... amazing. I'm not generally one for overly angsty South Park fics, but oh my god, the craziness and the depression in this was addictive and inspiring for, uh, screwed-up story ideas This was just so... perfect, absolutely perfect. I'm completely in awe.
K. J. Pitre
2008-09-08 . chapter 1
just to let u know, this started off great. im putting it in my favs
RoguefanAM
2008-07-02 . chapter 30
One of the most depressing fics I've ever read on FF(.)net. I seriously almost ended up crying at the end. Still, I liked the fic regardless. Just wish that the story would've had a happier ending, but really...I should've known better, no fic this dark has a happy ending. I guess I just...was hoping to be proven wrong.

Anyway - this fic was exceptionally well-written, one of best psychological fics out there for sure.

Keep up the good work! ^_^
MayMaddie
2008-07-02 . chapter 30
Wow... I'm kinda out of words right now. This was one hell of an intense fic! One chapter more would be nice but come to think of it, definetely not necessary. The ending was absolutely brilliant and came out of the woods. Loved it and honestly think that you should leave it here. It sort of fits the whole story that in the end there is no clear coclusion. Seriously bravo! You impressed me, this is now one of my fav South Park fanfic. Glad I read the story now and not back then when you started this. It would've been killind me waiting the updates. :D
Lady Azura
2008-05-20 . chapter 30
Holy crap.

Is that it? Is that the end of the story? If so, that was one incredible and intense fic. I really enjoyed it. If not, you HAVE to update or I'll simply die!
tyila
2007-12-24 . chapter 30
DUDECOMEONYOUCANTLEAVEUSLIKETHAT! YOU NEED TO UPDATE!! this is such a wonderful story, and you seriously need to write the last chapter!! I NED TO KNOW THE ENDING!

anyway, you are a fabulous writer and i happened to stubble upon the story and stayed up for 2 days straight just so i could read it all. that addicting!!

seriouslah, update!!
Colloqiual
2007-11-07 . chapter 1
AH EMERGENCY UPDATE NEEDED! Please, you're killing me here! D:

I am so, so glad that I found this story. Seriously, I was starting to loose hope that any author in existance could write good Stan/Kyle, or indeed a good SP fic in general. You have restored my faith.
I read this entire story over three (week)days. I think I may have failed a few of my classes, since I basically rushed through all of my homework in order to read every night, but it was definitely worth it.
It was much darker than I thought it would be when I first started it (you know, what with Kyle going insane and murdering five-year-olds and stuffs) but it was just sosogood that any amount of darkness just added to it. It was also a bit confusing at times (though, clearly, it was meant to be) and there was a lot of OOC-ing going on but you know what? I couldn't care less.
But AH HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME HANGING AT THE END LIKE THAT! That whole paradox thing is finally coming together and you just end it? ewgriyubgweryibuoegcy@!

But seriously UPDATE. This is far and away the best SP fic I've ever read, and even places at least fifth on my top ten for ever (and I've read a hell of a lot of fanfiction). Keep going! And just know that I will be posting a friendly reminder about once a week to do so for, you know, just about ever. So you might as well comply before I start overloading servers.

Just a fair warning.

- Corinna
styl3
2007-06-24 . chapter 30
While I feel Kyle thinks WAY too much (hahaha, I do this too), I love the whole story. Sometimes, and this sounds kind of blah to me, I feel this is like a real and I forget these are fictional characters. That's how good at writing it you are.

Now I have to tell you, I was supposed to study for a huge math test I have but I didn't due to the fact that I was completely taken over by this story.

I don't usually like gore, at all. Actually, the thought of the word "gore" just sort of doesn't exist in my vocabulary...so for you to have made me read this entire story is quite an accomplishment. Perhaps I didn't like these sort of stories because they weren't well written? I don't know.

I'm also glad I got to read this now and not way back when you started; I think I would've died from the waiting, hehe.

See? I even had to create an account just so I could let you know and cheer you on with this wonderful piece of work!

One last thing: I love Kyle. I love Stan. That's the whole reason why I even began to read this story. Even if he's not even...himself in it. I don't know what I'm saying anymore! I just love this.

I can't wait until the next and final chapter. :)
Famous Living Dead
2007-04-30 . chapter 30
Gah! Yes, it took me fourteen days to reply to your new chapter. I've been a bad panda. D:

But I'm reviewing now! So...

This chapter was all djgkdg! That's a good thing. I never related your story to Cartman's Incredible Gift, but sweet Jesus I envy your talent of putting that in there! So clever.

It's also really good how the quote from chapter 27 matches this chapter so well.

But really, maybe I'm just dumb, but I didn't see any of that coming. The corpses in relation with Stan and Kyle and I'm at a slight loss of words at the moment, resulting in rambling.

Awe and amazed, slightly frightening facial expressions at the fight between Stan and Kyle! It's so sad that all that's going on!

As for the beginning of this chapter. The way you wrote Kyle's train of thought was fantasmajorical. It was easy to relate Kyle's frustration and angsty angstyness. How it kept switching from one thought to another in blatant confusion. I now and forever continue to envy your writing skills.

THE WORST CLIFFIE IN THE HISTORY OF FOREVER HOW DARE YOU!

Very odd comment, yes. But hey, what're you gonna do?
sarah
2007-04-10 . chapter 30
whoaly crap
this is a really good fic, and im anticipating the next chapter. its intense
Marisa-san
2007-04-07 . chapter 30
Oh my god. Oh my god. This was probably your best chapter ever, but this chapter really made me feel terrible. I'm pretty close to crying right now, I can't believe THIS is how the story was going to end. I can't believe THIS. Oh my god.

Well you did an excellent job writing.. too excellent. I can really feel the hate, and it really drove me crazy. When you wrote about the two corpses not being there, it like clicked in my mind right away. And the first thought in my mind was literally "NO." WHYWHYWHYWHY.

I really can't get over this. What a terrible way to end this! I mean, you obviously did an amazing job writing this but... AH WHY.

This is definitely not how Stan/Kyle's life should have ended. They're best friends! I mean, dying together is one thing, but killing each other!? WHY.

Well.. I'm really really really highly anticipating the next chapter or epilogue or whatever. I can't stand the wait...

But just so you know, this was an amazing story. I loved it, it's really one of my favourites.
catc10
2007-04-07 . chapter 30
AOIG(HO*VEA@&%!QAGHA*pthbt!@($)@#&*
*guh*
Holy freakin' crap and flaming dick in a pile...
I think I know which fanart I'm gonna do just for you...
Nyar~squee!
ME
Marisa-san
2007-04-01 . chapter 29
Erghh.. this is selfish, but I never want this story to end. I just love it so much, I don't know what I'll read every week if I don't have this.. *tear*

Well, another great chapter, and I can't wait to read the next! :)
catc10
2007-04-01 . chapter 29
Woah woah woah!
So the one that by all means would normally stab him (even in the literal sence) is the one who *doesn't*?!?
Wacky.
*dancing for joy of update*
YAY!
I got too little sleep for a coherent review...
ME
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