yay! i liked it very much. what exactly have you got in mind for these guys, though?... and i have to ask... who is the love interest?! :) i know she's only 10 or 11, but so what! oh, and you can spell and use correct english grammar... your wish is my command! :)
lady muck xoxo

Love the story, and love the creativity of names. In Short, sweet nubins!

This is really good, keep going :D That was a long chapter!! lol! Happy Christmas :D xx

awesome! ha, derek's not much like his mother is he? too talkitive. update soon!

The titles all got me confused for a bit but I sorted my brain out! I love the idea!! Update soon pretty please!

Nice start! Keep it up!