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Interesting. The Wolves. Might they be werewolves? I love how you give personality to characters.

But this story has nothing to do with Vampire Plagues. There is a site called fictionpress . net, made for posting original fiction. Or, by some off chance, if this does have to do with the series, could you explain on the forum for this category?

That was Amazing! I am intigued...all i can say is i want more..

Blessed Be,

!,,!*Ivory*!,,!

Very well written. Some grammar here and there but that pales in comparison to the way you have started this story. You described th characters well, set up a basic plot line, left questions unasnwered, and held the reader's attention. I look foward to seeing more in the future.