Oh, now that's just evil. You have the beginnings of a wonderful story here, and you just dropped it? For shame!

Oh wow, it's been a while since I read this fic! Someone mentioned it the other day and I wondered if it had been updated... I'm sorry to see that it hasn't - I hope you haven't abandoned it? You do such a great job with characterization, and Roy in particular. I've been on a Roy-fic craze lately, and I'm finding that there are very, VERY few well-written GEN fics about him. Your "Finding Worth" is one of the best! This fic, and "Vengeance," both look like they will be just as good... I really hope you plan to continue them!

I'm sorry if I haven't reviewed before. I am very bad about remembering to do that for my favorite authors; I'm trying to do better. :P I hope to read an update from you soon!! This fandom desperately needs more authors and more fanfic of this caliber. :)

The beginning sounded very good, a pity this seems abandoned...

This is interesting. VERY. Interesting. Update fast! Soon!

Please say you haven't forgotten about this... I love action/adventure stories, and there are precious few to be found around here.

The premise is great, I think; there should be more stories on Roy and his team, 'cause they had to've gotten into strife at some point or another, right? The team as a whole is one of my favourite relationships of the fandom, so I hope you're continuing.

Only one chappie, but it's well-written, I didn't catch any mistakes, and everyone was in character. More please? *puppy dog eyes*

Woah...I'm already totally into this plot.

So...much...Havoc...

I love him so much. But that's irrelevant.

And I'm glad Fuery made his way into such a spiffy fic. I always got the feeling in the anime that he was kinda ignored. All he really did was dress up like a girl.

Hmm...all of your stories that I've read so far involve injury. YES! It satisfies my thirst for blood...ehem...

Anyway...great job, and keep up the super-tastic work!

you MUST update! This is the first story I've come across in weeks that's got me on the edge of my seat. What happens next?

Bah! Why must you write one really superb chapter and then not update? T_T

You've done a really nice job on this so far, and I can't wait to find out what happens next! :D

This story is awesome so far! Keep it up and update as soon as possible! I seriously need to know what happens to Roy! Great job!

...so NOW I sound like a stalker. Yeah. Well, it's all with the good - the dialogue's very accurate to the characters and FLOWS which is very nice, and there's a dryish humour all the way through. And Riza's well-characterised, hooray. She's one of my personal faves and people don't tend to write about her so often.

OMG!! I love this new story. But I must ask, as I have previously for your other story...please tell me that THIS one is HawkeyexMustang? Please...I mean, I won't stop reading because of it, but, it would really be cool! I loved this chapter, so, please update soon!!

Yuffie Paine (Aurum Potestas Est)

*sigh* there is nothing like a good fic to make a monster headache feel better.

Good Christ, they've got the Colonel, the Colonel is down! *flail* ugh, poor Mustang, the terrorists had to chose a sickday to gang up on him *sniffles*... I'm glad both him and Riza managed to get away alive.

Kudos for the spotless characterization! Keep 'em coming, cause woman, your writing is killing me.

And now I'll use my nagging powers and nag for a 'Vengence' update. T'would be a Christmas present for all your readers [and then you CAN'T make it is a cliffie, because seriously, what kind of present would that be? ] Or feel free to throw rocks at me for asking XD

I like this start--enough to put it on alert and go look as some of your other stories. :)

I hope you keep working on this. I really can hear the characters' voices speaking your lines.

Barbara

'Bout time this found its way into the light! And it's a damn good read, still. I'm looking forward to seeing more from this, and from 'Vengeance'. I've got bribery material, and I'm not afraid to use it.

HAH, this is pretty damn good homage, I must say! XD Better than I could write, for sure ('cuz you flatter me too much, Miss "I'm-so-awesome-it-hurts" Kellen)! XD *is feeling silly tonight* YAY and now my story has a "twin" in the FMA fandom! :D Hehe~ I am tickled that you used the title after all! (Though it was kinda weird seeing it in my inbox... even though I knew it was coming, I still did a double-take! XD)

*AHEM* So yes. We do think too much alike, and I'm interested to see what you have in store for poor Roy! Flame-boy better be ready for some not-so-happy things ahead. I'm even more interested to see just which of his many enemies wanted to take him down this time, and for what reasons, too... Of course it's generally because he knows too much, but what he knows too much -about- shall prove to be interesting. I love the way you write Riza; she's so in character that it's awesome! :D Hehe.

You know me. I can't WAIT to read more, m'dear! Keep up the awesome work, and feel free to stab QuickEdit when it botches things up for you. :F I'm loving this so far, and keep up the awesome work! (Now I have MORE stories to poke you about on updates! Bwahahaha!) XD

Take care! :D