you should write more. im interested. update

I love your story and can't wait to read the next chapter. I only review the good stories and yours is really good. =] hurry with that nesxt chapter!

Hmm, this is rather interesting.
Quite curious to see how this all pans out, so whenever you finish the next chapter, I'll be excited to read it!

Way to stick with a project :D

--Lemons

loved it! plz continue!

So are you ever going to update?
I really hope you do, sometime soon.
You said you would, but then again people do become busy so I don't blame you for not updating any time soon.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

You truly are an awesome writer. I really love the mysteriousness of Peter and Andra's relationship, and the part in the forest seriously gave me chills. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Update soon!

Oi! I came back and read all that and experienced the whole thing over again and you're still leaving me hanging?
Just kidding, I promise. I like this chapter. The crotchety old king of Celestine comes around, peter's on the mend. andra's about to tell the truth, and things are looking up. How exciting. Now hurry up with the next chapter! Patience is not my strong suit. (cough cough)
Till next time,
Elena

You broke up quotes a little in this chapter. I suggest a run through again to identify the speaker and keep all his/her lines together. If you want to do an interruption, stick a little tag or quote break between the quotes but keep everything in the same paragraph. That's the only thing I noticed that might need fixing.
Ah! I remember now! The bit about Peter that is. His letter said something.

YAY! I can review. Yes, Leezh, you did a stellar job on the action in this chapter. It's greatly improved! And the cliffie at the end. So cruel. Though, not too cruel because I can keep going and read what happens next. But the time it takes to leave a review... agonizing! Haha, jk.

Maybe I'm just reading more thoroughly this time around, or perhaps you revised it, but this chapter makes a lot more sense now. However, I hope you either reveal more about Andra's people or you just tell me, because I'm curious to know more about the Wanderers. Who they are, where they come from, etc. =]
Cheers! I'm off to the next chapter.

Yay! it's letting me review on this chapter! =]
I like the king of celestine. Not in the "he's so cool" kind of way but he's just so... brusque. You've characterized him very well.

Poop. So it won't let me review on chapter ten because I apparently already reviewed on it. But since that was such a long time ago, I hardly think that's fair. After all, I feel like I'm reading everything for the first time all over again. And I'm sure you've altered several, if not all, of the chapters.
Hmph. Anyways, I loved the exchange where he's trying to get her to call him by his first name and she just keeps sort of stumbling around it. It's charming and funny. =]

you're back! :))

still loving the story here hon ;)