The ending of the chapter sent me for a loop, there's more to Michael's scar then meets the eye.

Waiting patiently for the next chapter.

I loved this chapter! I can't wait to read more!

I like how you made alec. The Guys need a mentor. Good chapter, original story, can't wait to read more.

I simply cannot wait. Amazing story man, i hope you update soon :D

I was thrilled to find a new chapter on this story! I really love this story and hope you'll keep writing on it.

love it

Llandudno - the National Trust area

Hi! Just wanted to say-best AU story Ive read in AGES! And probably the only one that is updated still!! So, yeah-please keep publishing in both this and the 'Lone Traveller' story because they are both REALLY good!! Thankie :)

the parchment is behaving exactly like the cursed diary in book 2 of canon. Perhaps its not draining his life force, but everything else is just the same...

Yay! I'm so happy you have updated :) I had forgotten the story, so I have just reread it... and it's brilliant!! I so love this story!
I'm glad i found another person who hasn't read HP and the Deadly Hallows. I bought it... but I doubt I'll read it.
Looking forward to more :)

Well, this is a nice chapter! Wonder where this is going and what the prophecy REALLY contains... About the parchment: it's always difficult to work with a very powerful item. But it can have it's drawbacks: wrong advise based on differences in the universes, prejudices against/trust in people that do not deserve it in this dimension, refusing to help if they use it to often (as they were warned), etc. You could have them forgetting about it for a while as well, until it's turning up suddenly again. 'Alec' could also have made a mistake with the spells, as it was the first time he ever did this. You'll work something out, I have faith in you ;)
Now I wonder, why Alec would give that memory-vision to Harry... or if the parchement it faulty? :D
Lolchen~

This looks like an interesting story, possibly better than the standard brother-to-the-boy-who-lived deal. I'll be watching for more.

-demonicnargles

I just read the first chapter it is a great story I can't wait to read the rest. Thanks for the fun creative writing it is fun to read.

oh wow its old voldy update soon

Awesome story! Keep up the good work!