Aw, cute. :3 I adore this one shot.

how... cute

Not really a big fan of the Remus/Lily pairing, but this was very well written!
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hilarious. i want to see james' reaction to remus telling that he kissed lily

Wow. Thanks. I didn't really like Lily/Remus until now. I might make another incursion, though.

Thanks Again!

Prongsie's

Could be the butterbeer. Could be that Lily really would rather go out with Remus and hopes he feels the same. Remus, possibly unfortunately for him, would never betray his best friend that way.

“I find girls in general very frightening. Especially that six foot Slytherin – what’s her name? Louise something.”

AWW. Another funny and sweet and generally wonderful Lily/Remus story. Great!

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Awesome job!

You are an amazing writer!

I never thought of Remus ad Lily...but wow...this was definitely great!

*sighs* I felt like such a traitor reading this. Remus and Lily make such a cute, perfect couple though! D: It really tears at me, y'know? But then again; Lily and James... I mean... seriously now. You can't expect me to choose!

Aw ] I haven't read much Lily/Remus I like, as most of it's too long term for my tastes, but this was perfect. Just as Lily and Sirius is a plausible (brief) schoolday pairing, so are Lily and Remus, and you wrote them so well. Your Lily was expecially endearing, but fantastic job all around )

That was really sweet. But... but... what about Harry? Are you telling me he's actually Remus's child? :) Hee.

really sweet! love it!

Cute

I prefer Lupin to any of the other Marauders and I've always thought that Lily would too.

Great writing.

-R

yup, james would most certainly kill him }