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newphan
2008-07-30 . chapter 21
Interesting, very different..thank you
xorie5
2008-05-31 . chapter 21
sweet and pretty well written. With practice, you will become a great writer! I liked the plot, though it could have gone a little more in depth for years of Katerina living with Erik and their relationships and so forth. But oh well. Great job, you kept me reading it the whole way through. Keep writing!
Any1there4me
2008-01-13 . chapter 21
Brilliant, really! I'm awfully surprised you don't have more reviews, because, in my book, you're a terrific writer and wonderful tale spinner! Keep up the good work!...and I do hope you write more!

Any1there4me
Erisah Mae
2007-07-06 . chapter 21
Although somewhat fragmented, this story proved to be extremely well written, with strong characters, and a well-developed storyline, albeit a little discontinuos in some sections.
Very nice work.
Erisah
Catherine
2006-11-11 . chapter 21
Hey, I just stumbled upon your story. Loved it!! Especially appreciated the way you allowed Erik to mend his fences with Raoul and Christine; that happens too rarely in phanfic.

Thanks for the gift of time and effort you put into a story for everyone to enjoy!

Catherine
mun
2006-04-14 . chapter 21
ooh, very nice!
PhantomFlutePlayer
2006-04-04 . chapter 21
This story is awesome! I really think you did a wonderful job of building up the characters. I really enjoyed reading this, it was definatly a unique idea. I can't wait to read your other fanfiction!
CandleInTheDarkness
2006-03-27 . chapter 8
the fact that she just gets married out of no where is utterly confusing...Just a helpful idea, but you need some lead-up to Erik and Kat getting married.
Otherwise, very lovely!
LorieOh
2006-02-21 . chapter 21
I had passed this one up as it was being written but just read it as I am also reading your new phic.

Great story; you are a very imaginative writer. Only one thing: in French, if a singular noun starts with a vowel, the article is connected with an apostrophe. Thus, the title should be L'Aubaine (and if you don't do the apostrophe, the word is feminine, so it would be La Aubaine...) But the apostrophe is necessary; in French it sounds funny to put those two vowel sounds together.

I know, it's nitpicky. Please don't take this as a flame. With such a great story, it is a shame to see a little thing like that detract from it. Keep up the great writing (and update the new one SOON!)
phantomofthemusical
2006-02-16 . chapter 21
I love the story. This is the best complete POTO story I have read. I really like that you referenced Erik's love of all arts, not just music.
Sati Naberrie-Snape
2006-02-10 . chapter 21
Your story is wonderful!! You have a great plot with a lot of great twists! I hope to read more of your stories.
Thornwitch
2006-02-09 . chapter 9
Just for the record, no painter would EVER voluntarily live somewhere with no natural light, unless that person spent most of her time in a studio with large, preferably North-facing windows.
Silveni
2006-01-26 . chapter 7
Aww. I suppose that's not entirely descriptive, but still, the 'aww' sound is what I come up with. I like your depiction fo Erik-the-Phantom, he has become so lonely that he is more trusting of people? I like. And your Katerina is awesome. A resounding yes. I must continue.
surf with music
2006-01-10 . chapter 20
i'll try to review again, but it just denied me because i "had already reviewed the epologue (spelt wrong, i know) and so i wasnt allowed to, but last time i checked i didnt, so ... anyways... great story, i loved the end. i hope you write antoehr one that is jsut as exciting! bravo!
veritasa
2006-01-10 . chapter 21
I like it. The last sentence seemed to contrast with ther rest of the happy chapter, but it seems to fit Erik's personality as well. I read several chapters today, so forgive this one review alone. I thoroughly enjoyed the confrontation scene in the lair, and I thought that the switches in POV were well-executed. I'm glad for the happy ending. It was a privelege to read your story. I hope to read another soon.
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