| Reviews for L'Aubaine |
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spartan queen 12/22/05 . chapter 8ahh, this is wonderful! I like to read the stories of people who review mine...I'm very impressed, I really like your character Katerina, she's perfect. I hope you update soon! |
hunt4max 12/22/05 . chapter 8WOW! One of the best POTO fics I've read. A hundred thousand kudos to you for giving Erik a deserving woman, not like that simpleton Christine. She and the Fop, as he is known, were truly made for each other. But I digress. Please please PLEASE enlighten us with the events of the past two years. And as for the future; a Madame Phantom, perhaps? |
The Adventures of 12/21/05 . chapter 7wow! your an awsome wrighter its so cool! |
Passed Over 12/21/05 . chapter 7Good, a little short but I can't have everything. There meeting is to soon, she can't stay with him yet. |
Passed Over 12/21/05 . chapter 6I just read chapters 1-6 and love your story. It is or an original idea and I can't wait to see where you are going with it. Keep the story comming please. |
Dragonflame-05 12/20/05 . chapter 5A Mary-Sue is a female character who is perfect in everyway and always stays that way. She is always beautiful and has a great personality. She has a dark and/or mysterious past that fascinates that main male character. He finds her impossible to resist and ends up falling in love with her. A character should have at least a few flaws and a bad hair day every once and a while. I hope that helps. |
Dragonflame-05 12/20/05 . chapter 4This is a good story. Some advice: Don't forget to give Katrina some flaws or else she turns into a mary-sue. From what I have been hearing they are like the demons of the fanfic world. Anyway update soon. |
Passed Over 12/20/05 . chapter 4I am enjoying your story very much. Keep it coming. |
angel-lover elysian 12/20/05 . chapter 1Oo, "vicious misstress". I like |
phantomofthemusical 12/19/05 . chapter 3I love it. I can't wait untill he wakes up and finds out his savior has been living in the remains of his opera house!ppms M.G. |
Princess Persephone 12/19/05 . chapter 3Oh, poor Erik, he's ill. I hope he gets better soon. Interesting beginning-update soon! |