I enjoy your stories a lot but you seemed to alternate between present and past tense often. In the first sentence "From the moment I was born I'm destined to be a shinobi..." It would be "I /was/" But aside from little problems like this I loved reading yoru story! :3 It's so fun to read about this pairing. ShinoxHana are just so cute! Happy Writing.

D'aw X3
Everyone loves some crack ShinoHana love! =D

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Like the last it was great.
Keep up the kick ** work and do some more of this pairing.
Till next time,
See Ya

Aw...cute!