Reviews for Trouble on the Horizon

RoyalFanatic 2006-01-30 ch 4,	abuseNice. Good job. Pikachu: Go people! Well, nice chapter, keep going, blah blah blah. Although when they were talking about the vision, you wrote 'third', 'fifth', and 'fifth' again...whoops! Pikachu: XD Well, update soon!^_^
Juzu 2006-01-30 ch 4,	abuseYAY! Good chapter! I really like this!! There are a few typos, but nothing major that I can see at the moment. This is going to be a really good story!! ^_^
Juzu 2006-01-16 ch 3,	abuseYAY! KYROS! ^_^ oh, and a good chapter too! ^_^ I really like this! I'll try to come up with an idea to help you with the next chapter...i wanna read more of it soon! ^_^
Juzu 2006-01-16 ch 2,	abuseOh cool! This is going to be a good story! I really like it! And yay! Kyros won!! Of course he would though...he's mine after all! ^_^ But...ouch...poor Matthias...anyways, this is really good.
RoyalFanatic 2006-01-12 ch 3,	abuseWhoa...terrible danger...poor Matthias and the others! Update soon!^_^
RoyalFanatic 2006-01-10 ch 2,	abuseMost interesting story you have here. I must tell you that it grabbed my attention! Does this focus of on the original 12 SSB? Or does this also involve the other meleers. Based on what I read, it can go both ways! I'm just curious!XD Update soon!^_^
kr3w man 2005-12-27 ch 1,	abusevery good story, and good plot up to here. i hope this isn't the end for Link, as for he is one of the favorites...
Juzu 2005-12-20 ch 1,	abuseCool. This is going to be very interesting. I like it so far!! ^_^