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| Avatarlover1 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was so deep! I loved it! P.S. Would any of you mind reading my story, "Torn Love?" I really want more reviews! |
| Random.Gal930 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseWhat happened? Did Aang die when she married Zuko or something? |
| Eh...whatever 2007-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseNot bad. Quite frankly I get the sense that you need to make Aang some innocent, silly child just to make Zuko some passion filled sex god by forgetting that Aang himself is fun, adventurous, playful. All traits that I don't think he'll lose as he ages, ones that could lead to some interesting times in the bedroom, and ones rarely addressed when comparing the two. Unfortunately I get the feeling that this story is less about what Katara herself might feel and more of a reason to turn Zuko into some sex god straight out of a romance novel (something that is an incredible turn-off in Zutara stories). Which I find to be a shame considering you do have writing talent and a picturesque way with words. |
| justcallmefaye 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abusedarkly beautiful. very, very well done. ~Faye |
| Brittzy 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseAmazing once again Spleef. As always I can't wait for an update. |
| Wannabe Pirate 2007-08-12 ch 1, | abuseYou really captured Zuko's and Aang's differences within such a small drabble that I'm just stunned. And the way you wrote it...it just made me feel sorry for Katara. It's wonderful, truly wonderful. |
| LiveInThaskyE 2007-08-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nice again. Kinda relates to the Capture of the Maiden story in how Zuko has the fire that so powerful with their lovemaking. |
| libowiekitty 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abusewow- nicley written, very powerful |
| Paradigm08 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseOoh~ More goodness! I'm still loving all of this! Awesome job. |
| Le-PrePo-Liebe 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseo...zuko's hot literally hehe |
| Pavati 2006-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's always nice to read a Zuko x Katara x Aang story... wish it was longer tho |
| Dragon Jadefire 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseZuko: DJ, why do you have a bloody rusty spoon and blood all over you? Me: Uh...no reason. Katara: ZUKO! Zuko: What? Katara: Your pet dragon just killed the Avatar! Me: And Ozai, too. Zuko: DRAGON...JADEFIRE! Me: *flies away* |
| henna 2006-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abusezuko pwns over aang XD |
| BlueSkyHeaven 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseMy gosh! U've become one of my fav writers! Plz update this is SO good! Luv all ur stories 4 Avatar! |
| Zukosgal 2006-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou rock spleef! your drawings rock. My favorites are 'the iceburg and the inferno' and 'a loving moment'. and i love hot water and volcano, especially the part when katara was comparing her lovers about treating her like a porcelain doll. and i like this one, too. but, i can't find cold fire, and i've never read it before, so can you put it back on, cuz i've only read 2 of your books out of the series. you rock. and so does Zuko's butt! |