Love it! you should continue it!

Alright! To the following "reviewers"(who needs a good, hard kick in all of their backsides for showing the rest of us their intelligence...or lack of it): Yuck, Ahmar, Kyle R. Smith, Devilz Shadow, and Ishizu...

While it is true that this author or authoress should have researched cancer and AIDS a little further. While constructive criticism would help this person to write a little better,it would help even more so if these so-called reviews were actually constructive, not destructive! THE WAY YOU PEOPLE WENT ABOUT IT WAS JUST INEXCUSABLE! I don't belive that is how decent people are to behave. Do you honestly think that all that written abuse will help this person write any better? If you thought that, YOU ARE THE ONES THAT ARE INSANE AND NEED COUNSELING! Some of you insensitive jerks think that all that profanity was going to urge this person to write to your standards...HOW FREAKIN' SAD! There was no reason for you fools to cut this author or authoress to shreds like you did! This person could be learning to write a fanfiction and could use FRIENDLY advice on how to make it more intersting or accurate. From the looks of these idiotic posts here, some of you wouldn't know the meaning of the phrases "friendly advice" or "contructive criticism" if they bit you dead on your butts! All I am saying is GROW UP, FOR PETE'S SAKE, AND PLAY NICE!

this was very disturbing. go see a counselour!

YOU HAVE TO BE F**KING KIDDING ME! THIS IS WHAT COMES OUT OF YOUR "RESEARCH"? WHAT S**THOLE DID YOU SCRAPE THIS CRAP OUT OF? YOUR SENTENCE STRUCTURE IS NONEXISTANT, YOU'RE STORY MAKES NO SENSE, AND YOUR "INFORMATION" IS PURE BULLS**T! LOOK, YOU B*TCH, FOR ONE THING, THERE ONLY ONE TYPE OF AIDS! 2, YOU CANT GET AIDS FROM BLOOD ON YOUR SHIRT! THREE, HOW THE HELL DO YOU DIAGNOSE STOMACH CANCER FROM A WHITE TONGUE WITH BUMPS? FOUR, WHAT THE H*ELL DOES STOMACH CANCER HAVE TO DO WITH AIDS? FIVE, THIS GIRL IS IN A COMA, DOCTORS DONT EUTHANIZE THEIR PATIENTS THAT ARE IN COMAS! SIX, YOU DONT LET A GIRL WHO WAS JUST IN A COMA OUT ONTO THE STREET WITHH A F*CKING STRANGER BUCKNAKED! THATS JUST F*CKING WRONG! SEVEN, PEOPLE CANT HOLD THEIR PISS FOR FOUR DAYS, OK? AND BESIDES WHEN DID SHE GO INTO THIS F*CKED UP COMA THAT SHE DOESNT KNOW HOW TO TAKE A PISS? THATS IMPOSSIBLE! EIGHT, WTF? SHE HAS CANCER?? WHAT KIND OF CANCER DOES THIS GIRL HAVE? THERES MORE THAN ONE TYPE,OK?? NINE, YOU KNOW WHAT?? WHY O THIS EARTH DID YOU HAVE HIM CRY THAT HE'S F*UCKING SEXY?? YOU HAD HIM WHINING THAT HE'S LIKE A GOD! NO NO NO! OK? YOU SUCK AS A WRITER, I HOPE YOU GO HANG UP YOUR QUILL AND DONT TORTURE US WITH YOUR ABSOLUTE TOTAL BULLS**T AGAIN!

YOU ARE F*ING CRAZY, B*!
LEARN YOUR GRAMMER USAGE FIRST OF ALL BECAUSE THE WAY YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCES IS JUST F*ED UP!
ALSO, YOU NEED TO MAKE SENSE WITH YOUR STORIES. HOW THE HELL DO YOU FIGURE OUT WHAT TYPE OF AIDS? THERE IS ONLY ONE F*ING TYPE OF AIDS, YOU STUPID B*!
ALSO, HOW THE F* DO YOU GET STOMACH CANCER AND CHEST INFECTION FROM A WHITE TONGUE WITH BUMPS?
MAKE SOME SENSE WITH YOUR F*ING STORY AND THEN MAYBE MORE PEOPLE WOULD LIKE THIS STORY!
SERIOUSLY; YOUR STORYLINE SUCKS, IT MAKES ABSOLUTELY NO SENSE, AND YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW YOUR CHARACTERS SHOULD ACT!
PEOPLE LIKE YOU DON'T DESERVE TO BE AUTHORS HERE ON FANFICTION!
IT'S BECAUSE OF PEOPLE LIKE YOU THAT DEGRADES THE WHOLER PURPOSE OF FANFICTION!
GET THE F* AWAY FROM THIS PLACE AND NEVER COME BACK, YOU STUPID LITTLE B*!

Erika: This is a great fic!
Ravyn: Yeah, even though the AIDS and cancer are very very unrealistic. I hope it turns out they don't have either, cause it certainly doesn't sound like they really have them!
Erika: Also, chat format and lyrics are against TOS.

Please learn something about AIDS before you go off trying to use it as a cheap sympathy plot device.

Okay, first off you don't seem to know anything about AIDS or cancer. The symptoms Yami has are all entirely wrong and well for your MARY-SUE's cancer you seem to remain unspecific. I mean, she just has cancer? The hell is that? Maybe it's a special cancer... who knows?
Second off... How can these two have these diseases and still be able to go out and have fun without having to go to the hospital for proper treatment? I would think that's something important...

Do you know anything about AIDS!!? Vomiting, diarhea, and growling stomachs ARE NOT symptoms. And there are no types of AIDS. Did you sleep through your Aids lesson? I think you did.

This is good. I really wish we could see more of the others just to see how they are ignoring Yami.

Yeah. I am glad you put in some fun stuff that they can do. I think it is funny how you are starving them cause sometimes I do that in my stories and accident becasue I want them to do something first. Well keep up the next cahpters. ^_^

this is looking great! keep it up!

Atemu is getting a little conceited. I hope that makes him feel better, since his friends are ignoring him even Yugi. This is great, I feel bad for Crystal and Atemu for being so sick. Good job.

Leiren what have you been doing? I would love to come to the boardwalk cause I have never been to a beach before. That would be soo much fun. I really wish you would tell me what you were up to on that New Years Eve.

That was a good chapter. I hate to say this but they are getting shorter. I want longer ones. I know you are possible of doing it so come on. Challenge yourself. ^_^ Bye bye

haha Atem looks hott in bathing suits! hehe so true! haha keep it up!